Methodical Love

So ordinary so mine so pure just like you
You are the rhymic of my soul the vessel 
Which holds my ethnicity, my blood which 
Runs through my soul, My soul just calls out for you. 
When I feel lost I feel your vibes like a radar
Pinning my location on every map across the world 
Searching for pin points you point me to the direction
Your mighty expensive taste is leaving me penniless
Your expensive taste is leaving on Bankrupt 
My pocket is going to become undone because of you
You didn't think about my financial status you just searched and clicked away
Your anger against me is reasonable because I'm losing myself along the way
A road so unclear, not willing to show its way. 
Why do you have expensive taste, My dearest love 
Am I the drought of a spring to become undone
Your taste of money is to costful. 
oh lord, I feel like my wallet is about to become undone. 
The taste of time is flying by rapidly. 
Across the world I travel and yet I cannot find my pin location.
Your anger against me is meaningful but forgive me, My dear 
I don't want to become the ignition of your anger.
I feel so lost without you near me. I feel like the California drought
Everything is so limited and time is racing up against me. 
Give me your courage, please. Stop being a Bandit of time. 
Forgive my slug mode, I can only travel as fast as a turtle. 
I know you're angry with me because I'm falling behind schedule.
Maybe if you buy me an alarm clock, I can do everything on time. 
I'm the real motive of your anger I know this my dear. 
I cannot rush into conclusions like you can. 
Please give me an opinion, My dear roadrunner why so fast. 
Why do you run so quickly? Why can I not keep up with you?
Why are you always running so quickly?
I feel like I'm losing myself within time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/23/2017 2:36:00 PM
Dramatic!! Well done Marilyn. Absolutely good written.
Login to Reply
Newman Avatar
Marilyn Newman
Date: 6/24/2017 2:40:00 AM
Thank you very much!! I'm glad you love my writing
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad