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Meteor Showers

Meteor showers
explode bright, colorful streaks...
natural fireworks



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Written 2-23-2016
'See or Feel' Contest
8th Place

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Teddy Kimathi

March 17, 2016 at 4:29 AM

Greetings Susan. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Lenny Gazbowski

March 14, 2016 at 9:49 PM

Well done Susan. Nice haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2016 at 6:51 PM

You did not do monoku but glad to see this on the winner list. it's a pretty poem. Congrats.

Susan Gentry

March 24, 2016 at 12:12 AM

I did a monoku first and had entered it. Can't remember why I changed it but forgot about it being in contest when I did. Was gkad to see it on the list! :) Thank you Andrea, very nice of you.

Vladislav Raven

March 13, 2016 at 11:58 AM

Hi Susan, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I enjoyed your Monoku of multi-coloured life....Vlad.

Susan Gentry

March 24, 2016 at 12:08 AM

Thanks Vlad! :)

Paul Callus

March 13, 2016 at 5:37 AM

...and back with deserved congratulations, Susan...well done!!:) ~ Regards ~~ paul

Susan Gentry

March 24, 2016 at 12:07 AM

Thanks so much! Glad you did :)

Poet Destroyer A

March 12, 2016 at 8:49 PM

Susan, Congratulations on your awesome Monoku Win. Stop by my latest blog "Spellbound -I'm so late-" if you'd like. Sorry, it took me this long to close this contest. I hope it does not discourage you to enter any of my future contest. I do apologize. Love LINDA

Susan Gentry

March 24, 2016 at 12:06 AM

Thank you Linda! Oh no, I appreciate being on the list and appreciate you for sponsoring contests. :)

Paul Callus

February 28, 2016 at 10:05 AM

I have enjoyed your 'explosive' take on this inspiring picture, Susan! Well done! Hoping to see this on the winners' list:) Regards // paul

Susan Gentry

March 4, 2016 at 2:00 AM

Thank you Paul! Glad you enjoyed.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

February 28, 2016 at 7:45 AM

Pleasure seeing nature's wonder shared by you. Have a wonderful week.

Susan Gentry

March 4, 2016 at 1:58 AM

Thank you Iris! Very sweet.

Funom Makama

February 25, 2016 at 9:48 AM

There is this unique insurance your works always give my expectations And that satisfaction only builds more castles for my curiosity to thrive, waiting for subsequent results of your talent and thinking.

Susan Gentry

February 27, 2016 at 1:42 AM

Ahh thank you very much! What an awesome comment. :)

Timothy Hicks

February 24, 2016 at 10:15 PM

That's cool about the dragonfly landing on your coffee cup! It seems we both have had some interesting encounters with nature. I wasn't aware that no one could see my picture that I shared on the poem ... I think I fixed it now.

Susan Gentry

February 25, 2016 at 8:50 AM

Yes, I saw it last night. It is beautiful! I didn't realize it was so up close. Dragonflies are so beautiful anyway and right there on your fingertips! Awesome. I never think to take a pic till it's all over lol.

Timothy Hicks

February 24, 2016 at 9:49 PM

I can see where you went with that .... very nice. Meteors showers are the best kind of fireworks (especially those ones that leave a trail for more than a split second) ... Good luck on the contest, Susan :)

Susan Gentry

February 25, 2016 at 8:45 AM

Exactly! Thanks Tim :)

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2016 at 5:38 PM

this is one idea that came to me too until my husband provided me with his own "idea" which I plan to show tonight sometime. you might be surprised!! You did very well here.

Susan Gentry

February 24, 2016 at 12:52 AM

Thank you Andrea! Can't wait to see what his idea is!!! :)