Meteor Shower

Last week I looked up
And witnessed with my very own
God given eyes
The impossible

Last week I looked up
And experienced heaven tearing apart

Last week I looked up
And saw God's own creations
Hurtling down from their throne
In an annual commemoration.

You have not been forgotten.
Even the stars themselves 
Know what they have lost.

                                               Sa aking mahal na bituin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 10/24/2017 12:39:00 AM
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Date: 12/20/2011 11:35:00 AM
Beauti..... Peaceful Christmas I wish for you. OXOX Love Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/20/2011 8:53:00 AM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Jonathan. Love and blessings, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2011 12:48:00 PM
wow(: insightful
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Date: 8/11/2010 11:51:00 AM
A joy to read an oldie by one of my favorite poets Jonathan. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:56:00 PM
so beautiful,very well penned-charma
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Date: 8/24/2009 11:55:00 AM
It was beautiful wasn't it. Lovely write. Thank you for sharing it Jonathan. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 11:49:00 AM
A beautiful and vivid commemoration. I did not get to see it, but not see thru your write, Godly bless to you, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/24/2009 11:21:00 AM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
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