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04/25/2024
For: Line Inspiration Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Metaphors written in psychedelic ink inside my mind like a projector slide show of insanity. The flying pig in the boiling sea chastses me, I must uncover the cosmic key or the bull will smash all the inventory. I refuse to be a diamond in a sea of glass or Alice through the looking glass, or stare to long into the abyss and see it staring back at me. The golden heart has turned to red the grapes of wrath are pressing out the blood of innocence and I must sound retreat in psychedelic ink or become lost in illusions, delusions of peace. 4

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Date: 5/4/2024 12:00:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write again. Have a blessed weekend.............
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Chetta Achara
Date: 5/4/2024 3:20:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/4/2024 10:08:00 AM
Nice poem/
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Chetta Achara
Date: 5/4/2024 10:14:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 4/25/2024 4:40:00 PM
wow, your poem is fabulously captivating from beginning to end. Every line, every verse was brilliant...seriously. A true contest contender...have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 4/25/2024 12:35:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative write with a great picture. We live in a crazy world that can touch us within. "Good Luck" I did 2... Have a blessed day writing away................
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Date: 4/25/2024 9:49:00 AM
Hello Chetta, you took me on a journey through a mind ablaze with surreal visions and metaphors. It's a wonderful exploration of inner turmoil and the struggle to navigate the chaos within. Your words speak existential reckoning, where the line between reality and illusion blurs. What a haunting fragility of sanity and the quest for meaning in the midst of madness. - Blessings, Daniel
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Chetta Achara
Date: 4/25/2024 9:52:00 AM
Sometimes the chaos within seems more real than the chaos without.

Book: Shattered Sighs