Metaphorically Speaking

No matter how long you look to the sky
Rain wouldn't fall if there are no clouds;
So engage the sun, warm up your oceans
And uplift humid air as high as you can--
And keep repeating till misty clouds form.

Stars don't appear till the advent of dark,
So take your sunny day on a joyous ride--
Let it shine in beauty of traversing the arc
Until on horizon meets crimson twilight
Readying lucent stage for a starry night.

Sun won't rise till the dawn makes a call,
So take the nightfall on the hunt for light
Rotating the earth till you hear birdsongs
Making your way through retreating fog
To witness the dawning of golden vistas.
 
Now you are glad you can make rainfall,
Happy as well you will conquer the stars,
And find your path to your own aurora.

April 28, 2019
HM: Strand choice J contest by Brain Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/30/2024 7:12:00 AM
A well crafted write Vijay, I enjoyed the read
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Date: 3/18/2020 11:43:00 PM
Rich metaphors and wonderful perceptions all wonderfully crafted in your winning piece Vijay. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/27/2019 7:14:00 AM
Metaphorically well-said, VJ! Such creative imagery ... my, oh my. Sparkling fine poetry. Love and peace always.
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Date: 5/21/2019 9:39:00 AM
This meant a lot to me this morning. Beautiful ideas.
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Date: 5/18/2019 6:49:00 AM
Yes indeed, life is enjoyable whilst you wait. Some great things happen on their own, no need getting worked up. A good write.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2019 10:26:00 AM
Many thanks Aniruddha--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 5/15/2019 8:51:00 AM
Dear Vijay: Like a prayer of faith in Nature. Love how each verse outlays the natural cycles of of the world. SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2019 7:49:00 AM
Many thanks SuZ.
Date: 5/14/2019 10:46:00 AM
Nicely done of your elaborating in detail, that which perpetuates the natural cycles that surrounds our being, Aloha wk
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2019 7:48:00 AM
Much appreciate, William..many thanks.
Date: 5/9/2019 2:23:00 PM
Hello Vijay Pandit, how do you find a path to your own aurora?Where do you find it? I will try hard to find it. have a nice day my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2019 7:48:00 AM
Keep looking..you will find it..much appreciate, Darlene.
Date: 5/1/2019 6:24:00 PM
It seems you have the recipe for clouds and good poetry. Thanks for your visit Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/2/2019 7:28:00 AM
Much appreciate Richard..many thanks.
Date: 5/1/2019 1:23:00 PM
Metaphorically speaking your poem is magic and realistically speaking it took my breath away. You create an aura around each and every poem you write, and in so doing my friend, we may find our own aurora! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2019 2:01:00 PM
Much appreciate Jennifer your kind remarks..many many thanks.
Date: 5/1/2019 9:38:00 AM
I completely enjoyed your Amazing verse, Vijay.. It certainly uplifted me.. A splendid verse, my friend.. A fave for me!! Have a blessed day..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2019 1:45:00 PM
Many thanks Robertina..much appreciate.
Date: 5/1/2019 8:12:00 AM
Your poem uplift and inspires Vijay! I loved it! : ) xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2019 1:45:00 PM
Much appreciate Connie your visit and comments..many thanks.
Date: 4/30/2019 3:24:00 PM
Looking this over again, and that last part is so superb how you ended the poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2019 5:31:00 PM
Your return visit is much appreciated, Andrea..many many thanks.
Date: 4/30/2019 2:39:00 PM
As I read, I basked in poetic light cast* Its beams so broad and gleaming in sweet golden hues* With silent prayers that this verse shall forever last* And the ballerina dance without any shoes.* A truly wonderful poem you have created my great friend! A fav..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2019 5:30:00 PM
Enjoyed the rhymes you wrote in your comments..you are a gifted poet my friend..much appreciate..many thanks.
Date: 4/30/2019 12:13:00 PM
A Metaphorical magical read, Vijay...looking good my friend...happy endings...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2019 2:14:00 PM
Thank you WW for your visit and comments..much appreciate.
Date: 4/30/2019 8:26:00 AM
This is a great poem Vijay. I like the line , so take your sunny day on a joyous ride! Well written straight through ! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2019 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Heidi..much appreciate, as always.
Date: 4/30/2019 6:39:00 AM
Excellent and well penned poem. Enjoyed reading it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2019 2:13:00 PM
Many thanks Ravi..much appreciate.
Date: 4/30/2019 1:28:00 AM
Excellent Vijay. Take what you have and enjoy it while you can, new things await. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2019 2:13:00 PM
Much appreciate, Judy..many thanks.
Date: 4/29/2019 5:51:00 PM
vijay, you flow with your own essence... beautiful musings from your spilled ink!....huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2019 2:12:00 PM
Thank you Nette..much appreciate.
Date: 4/29/2019 3:18:00 PM
I like this; beautiful image; I want to find my, "aurora"; well penned.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2019 2:12:00 PM
In many ways your aurora shines in your poetry..much appreciate, MLK..many thanks.
Date: 4/29/2019 1:29:00 PM
You speak to the mind.. to the heart.. to our emotions and imagination.. you speak to your avid readers and let them read up to you and connect to your profound visions and calls.. you speak poetically, dear Vijay, and your poem works its magic! A beauty and a FAV! My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/29/2019 2:43:00 PM
Such pleasure I find reading your comments my friend! Much appreciate your support and in depth analysis. A very special thanks for the FAVE. God bless! Regards.
Date: 4/29/2019 1:20:00 PM
Loved this, what is a poet without a metaphor?
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/29/2019 2:41:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by SO..much appreciate.
Date: 4/29/2019 8:42:00 AM
This poem is very well-written and thought-provoking, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/29/2019 2:40:00 PM
So kind of you Janice..much appreciate your visit and comments..many many thanks.
Date: 4/29/2019 5:50:00 AM
Profound messages that enlighten the mind after one takes the time to meditate on them my dear friend, Vijay! Wonderfully done!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/29/2019 2:39:00 PM
Always love to read your comments my friend..much appreciate..many thanks, Demetrios.
Date: 4/29/2019 12:11:00 AM
Nicely structured and well expressed, Vijay, very good write.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/29/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thank you my friend..much appreciate your visit and comments.
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