Notes About The Poem

Share verbatim (as is) just ONE LINE from a fellow PS poet’s work (poem or prose) which contains a unique metaphor that has left an impression on you. Then extend it by a freshly penned line of your own to make up the couplet.

My breath was taken away by the poet’s fearless poetry and so I’ve chosen this one of hers. There are many levels of   

  • Metaphors
  • Expression
  • References

including and appearing…

"Le voyant seer letters" 

The "Letters of the Seer" by Arthur Rimbaud, are two letters written in May 1871. In these letters, Rimbaud expresses his desire to become a "voyant," a seer.  Arguing that a oet must become a "seer".  Personally I think it can't hurt to be a voyant, but not necessarily.  Rimbaud predicted a future where women, freed from servitude, would also become poets and discover their "piece of unknown"

note: Too late for the contest "Metaphor Treasure Hunt"

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Inspired by;

Line chosen...  "drawn to them I unfold like origami "

The Plural Sky and the Temptation of Its Mirrored Eyes

by Candide Diderot ‘24

Metaphor Treasures

drawn into them I unfold like origami
undone are the obsidian mirrors upon me
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Beaufort Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 1:34 PM
Anaya, amazing that there is so much to appreciate in the past and so much wisdom we can build on. You do a great job! The honor you bestow on those who came before seems very genuine. Smiles!!
Ashley Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 8:28 AM
Dearest Anaya, your poem reflects two unique creative minds joined together in poetic enlightenment, expression and finesse. Beautiful! Warmest wishes to you, my wonderful poet friend.. ~Susan
Hind Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 4:17 PM
This is so gorgeous. I loved it
Anaya Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 4:42 PM
'D I was very careful expressing myself amongst another poet, if you know what I mean~ Hey I love the Rain...
Godwin Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:03 PM
Very cerebral, maybe even beyond me. I'm going to the dictionary and will be right back, I mean brb, ok, a dark motive glass formed by .... got it! Deep. I don't know if this contest has been finalized but think this should do well. I've been unable to comment for weeks due to a hand injury; I've only posted w/ husband's help which was hilariously frustrating each time. Good to read/comment on your work again.
Anaya Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 11:55 AM
I'm glad to hear you are fine, it sounds painful, wishing you a quick recovery CayCay. I can't even begin to reveal my many aliment's! Yes, obsidian a black volcanic glass. the Aztecs used it for ceremonial weapons. Thanks for the smiles & Happy Thanksgiving week!
Poet Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 2:44 AM
This truly reflects your lovely character and is very sincere! Exquisite, Anaya! Outstanding visions that echo the profound artistry within you!
Anaya Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 1:57 PM
Im grateful to know such great poets as yourself, Soto Poet. Have a happy Thanksgiving! Xhugs
Rolland Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 3:38 PM
gorgeous lines, Rimbaus was a "voyant" at 17. he is the best poet i read, thanks for mentioning
Anaya Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 1:58 PM
Yann, I always learn here from you wonderful poets! Im grateful... ')
Kauffman Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Gorgeous, Anaya! Amazing imagery that reflects the artistic depth in you! Sending you blessings of light as you "unfold" to its melody! Happy Thanksgiving!
Anaya Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 10:39 AM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate that, hugs. Couplets created by the joy of their poet admirers. ALL WINNERS! More needed to enter this opportunity. Happy Thanksgiving! Giving thanks, I'm all in~
Goldsmith Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Your "Metaphor Treasures" only has 2 lines but they are 2 Great lines. Many times, less can be much more. Hope you are OK... Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away..........
Anaya Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 10:11 AM
I'm blessed for your visit sweet Paula & filled with thankfulness! Thanksgiving blessings underway~making the time to write away ;)
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