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for the  Metaphor Treasure Hunt Poetry Contest of Suzette Richards

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Metaphor Treasure Hunt - title revision

“You are the sonnet I weave with soft swirls.” I spill ink, and your butterfly beauty unfurls. Line 1 Inspired by “Leaves of Love” by Ink Empress, 1/24/2025
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Crandall Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 6:04 PM
A nice matching of Inks and your lines - pretty!
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 9:04 AM
You can't go wrong using pretty lines from Ink Empress!
Roper Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Beautiful imagery, congratulations on your win
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 7:03 AM
Congrats!! Way to go. Sara K
Jones Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations on your placement! Inks words are gold aren’t they?
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 9:05 AM
For sure. And thanks, Karen
Gauthier Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 5:48 PM
Lovely couplet, Andrea ~
Maverick Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 12:25 AM
Filling the page with great imagination And inspiration Andrea.)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 10:45 AM
"You Are" is a lovely 2 line write. "Good Luck" Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
Kendrick Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 4:39 PM
Good one, if it is for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Hind Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 4:30 PM
Lovely!! Good luck :)
Kerr Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 4:28 PM
Majestic doesn’t even begin to do this couplet justice. A truly outstanding work of art. Thanks for sharing your talent with everyone. Howard
Rolland Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 4:07 PM
such beautiful and sensitive lines, enjoyed
Bayles Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 3:11 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Andrea,
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 12:59 PM
Wonderful choice, from a brilliant poetess, Aloha, William.
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