Metaphor Treasure Hunt


“Fall sings its song in a rhythmic glissando voice”
for the feathered leaves on flight, rustling to rejoice. 

Inspired by : Autumn’s Russet Leaves by : Lin Lane (2025)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 12:34 PM
Great job inspired by the line from another great soup writer. Congrats
Drowley Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations on your win and your well-measured couplet!
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 7:02 AM
Congrats!! Way to go. Sara K
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Richards Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 12:44 AM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win, Subimal, with this well-crafted couplet. The first line dances with musicality and seasonal grace. The added line elevates it into something symphonic. It is a pleasure to behold.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 7:15 AM
Thank you, Suzette, so much for the placement and for your erudite comments that uplifted the spirit of my muse.
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