Metaphor

She read and what she saw,
The oblivion and reminiscent thoughts
She knew, she would be in an awe,
If she knew what i said and what my mind froughts.

Confusion, i am living in, I can't state
Maybe better if i can do more
To tell her, i am there, so please wait,
But for what? She loves me no more.

I cry, rave, deem myself unworthy,
But if I be of worth one day, she would die
And to that poor soul all material and earthy
With smiling face  would say goodbye?? 
                                                    Akash sangwan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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September 20, 2024 at 11:47 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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