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She read and what she saw, The oblivion and reminiscent thoughts She knew, she would be in an awe, If she knew what i said and what my mind froughts. Confusion, i am living in, I can't state Maybe better if i can do more To tell her, i am there, so please wait, But for what? She loves me no more. I cry, rave, deem myself unworthy, But if I be of worth one day, she would die And to that poor soul all material and earthy With smiling face would say goodbye?? Akash sangwan

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Date: 9/20/2024 11:47:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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