Metamorphosis - Itty Bitty Version

Caterpillar crawling – 
Fat and fuzzy.
Footstep falling – 
Flat and scuzzy.


for Andrea's Itty Bitty Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 20, 2014 at 12:46 PM
ILENE, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA
Richards Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 9:31 AM
How can we not smile while reading this little gem? Loved it Ilene !! Congrats to you!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 12:44 AM
Fine poetry and a great win Ilene ,,,, Congrats !
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 12:13 AM
Awwww, kind of sad, yet funny too Ilene. All my favorite poets seem to have entered this contest. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 11:40 PM
Of the funny ones I got, I think this one was the best. WELL done. I loved it. Congrats in my contest.
Johnson Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 2:02 PM
Fuzzy wasn't fuzzy anymore. Was he.
Callus Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 2:23 PM
Oh my! what a change! poor thing! better luck than the caterpillar :) // paul
Callus Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 5:01 AM
congrats on fine win, Ilene :) Happy Easter. // paul
Gorelick Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 2:19 PM
Cute, Cute! well done. BG
Allison Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 1:29 PM
Love the alliteration and rhyme and the humour at the end - good luck in the contest. RIP little caterpillar :-( Hugs Jan xx
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