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Metamorphosis In Motion

chrysalis shaking

                                             agape-ing

                                        butterfly making





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Susan Jeavons

October 2, 2019 at 2:06 PM

Short and very sweet poem. Blessings Maureen.

Brenda Chiri

August 26, 2019 at 7:30 AM

Simply amazing girl!;)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 26, 2019 at 9:05 AM

Thank you Brenda! I've had one butterfly so far, waiting on two puba, think I'm going to miss them tho, head'n to the cabin with my bestie and our dogs :))) xomo!

Michelle Faulkner

August 23, 2019 at 11:36 PM

Life can be butterfly making , cleverly put!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 24, 2019 at 7:59 AM

That line is clever, I love it! My first puba looks almost ready, butterfly countdown commencing... Hugs! xomo

M. L. Kiser

August 22, 2019 at 1:26 PM

Another fave, rather melodic.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 23, 2019 at 2:32 PM

Thank you! I have four monarch butterfly puba I'm waiting on. Heading to the cabin for a few days, afraid I'm going to miss their debut ;), xomo!

Silent One

August 18, 2019 at 5:11 AM

oooh... like poetry in motion....

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 18, 2019 at 6:08 AM

Yes! At last! ...not to go counting my butterflies before they hatch ;), xomo!

Jeff Connelly

August 17, 2019 at 11:14 PM

The simplicity of simply being a butterfly Maureen. When as a kid living in Hawaii, monarch butterflies were truly treated like royalty; and close to being considered illegal to kill one. It was encouraged to preserve them. My brother and I nurtured so many caterpillar to butterfly births, and each one always amazed me. A wonderful poem Maureen. Thank you.

Jeff Connelly

August 19, 2019 at 1:44 PM

The Northern Sun catalog has a wonderful t-shirt with a caterpillar forming a question mark, asking, " Do You Have Milk". Check their catalog out, and no I don't work for them lol.

Jeff Connelly

August 19, 2019 at 1:28 AM

Maureen, I tried to write basically as if writing for a contest. I wrote a bunch of Italian named plants, but no one is reading them, but with this poem of yours I am going to do a poem about milkweed. Thanks Maureen.

Jeff Connelly

August 18, 2019 at 10:46 PM

When I visited Saint Martin there was a butterfly farm. Walking into each room was a wonderment. Certain species of butterflies in their habitate. You could sit on a bench and just watch them flying around; sometimes landing on me. Truly a great feeling. I'm happy to read that you're one of the sources for the two generations migration Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 18, 2019 at 6:06 AM

They are absolute royalty for me. Lovely story! I am so excited. My two other caterpillars have now climbed up to assume the position. My milkweed garden at last producing fruit. (thank you to my landlord for letting me wild his land) ;), and thank you! xomo

Timothy Mcguire

August 16, 2019 at 8:10 PM

Beautiful poem no faking!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 18, 2019 at 5:52 AM

Tee he ;), thankya! xomo!

Heidi Sands

August 16, 2019 at 1:34 PM

Great one! I can see it. I remember sitting watching them when I was young, waiting and waiting :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 16, 2019 at 2:00 PM

Mezmerising! At last my garden is bearing fruit ;), Been working on a Monarch for years! Have two more to go. <3 xomo!

Tom Cunningham

August 16, 2019 at 1:22 PM

Lovely image Maureen, reminds me of those wild life programmes' where they speed up the images. Tom

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 16, 2019 at 2:02 PM

Thank you Tom! I am elated! My first Monach in progress. This one indoors from an egg. The two I collected after mine hatched are a little behind. So exciting ;), xomo!