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10 placement Premier contest

blessings from above

transformed lust to love

delusion to illumination

earth-heaven bilocation

Unseeking Seeker sponsored

written 12/07/2024

 

Metamorphosis

Realisation is the change and not any physical, evolution has pushed us way up past the primates, no need for wings to grow or patterns to appear, the inner self is the one that perceives and absorbs, truth lay around us from eternal times before galaxies, earth is merely the platform for our journeys, self is an infant that stares in wide eyed amazement, slowly like water onto lime rocks, wisdom seeps in, Realisation is the change, body yields to age, self is aware increasingly of the reality of purpose, the curiosities of love and romance are soon settled, the challenges of a life driven by want, understood, wealth is a paper bag of unwanted burdens, desire is a hunger that keeps us tethered to objects, Realisation is the change, as the mist of mystery lifts, the glow of wisdom lights up things for what they are, there is calmness in this vision, there is peace, when what is precious shifts from material, to values that are more sublime, intangible, when the self is no longer an ego with an identity, but a speck in the vastness of the entirety of truth, real change has come. with that change, with that realisation, our metamorphosis is complete! we seek nothing, we crave nothing, silence, calmness, peace of existence, existence that is eternal- we are no longer physical!
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Onclaud Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 10:30 AM
another feather on your cap, kris...congrats on your fine win!
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Thanks Nette! Happy it was placed with high quality poems that were in the contest! Mine are often simple sans vocabulary to reach the majority!
Empress Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 9:05 AM
“ when what is precious shifts from material, to values that are more sublime, intangible” love that , so true, profound and well written: i agree, so many are tangled in material possessions but if only they knew theres more to life: pleasure reading this powerful write! Congratulations on your win
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 9:29 AM
Thanks Ink!! Pleased to have your lovely comments!:)
Onclaud Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 4:36 AM
remarkable piece on self awareness for metamorphosis of life changes...good one, kris!
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Nette! Always a delight to have your visit! Charmed!
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