Metamorphosis

My Dusk sky Blurred blues dye Clouds creep in sly In storm surging high Bird of crushed wings I fly Find in debris wrecked nest lie Hued dawn lifts new sun I descry Your lush lawn blooms I turn butterfly.
November 6, 2019 Syllable count : 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9 Checked on howmanysyllables.com Rhyme : Checked on RhymeZone.com Contest : Rhyming Nonet Sponsor : Charles Messina
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Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 12:10 PM
Congrats, Subimal. I especially liked how you turned into a butterfly at the end!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 8:55 PM
Wonderful Subimal! These are not easy to create. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
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November 14, 2019 at 1:03 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Subimal :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 6:48 AM
Wonderful write Subimal. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charlie
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