Metamorphosis

Ha! the naivety of man, 
In death seeks afterlife 
In life avoids death at all cost!



~03/16/19
~Contest: 21 Syllables 
~Sponsor: Kevin Shaw
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Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 7:57 AM
Congrats on your win, Abdul.
Shaw Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 5:13 PM
Hello Abdul, I loved your little poem and would have liked to place it higher than 7th in my contest, however I actually counted 22 syllables. Well done though, regards, Kevin
Mandani Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 9:22 AM
Please double-check your count with our 'Syllable Counter' and www.haikusyllablecounter.com. It is 21 syllables -- 7/6/8. All the same, thanks for the placement, Kevin.
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