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Metamorphosis

Ha! the naivety of man, In death seeks afterlife In life avoids death at all cost! ~03/16/19 ~Contest: 21 Syllables ~Sponsor: Kevin Shaw

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/24/2019 7:57:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Abdul.

Kevin Shaw

Date: 3/21/2019 5:13:00 PM

Hello Abdul, I loved your little poem and would have liked to place it higher than 7th in my contest, however I actually counted 22 syllables. Well done though, regards, Kevin

Abdul Malik
Date: 3/22/2019 9:22:00 AM

Please double-check your count with our 'Syllable Counter' and www.haikusyllablecounter.com. It is 21 syllables -- 7/6/8. All the same, thanks for the placement, Kevin.