Metals

All gold glitters lies
Diamonds graciously greedy
Silver is most pure
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Doggett Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 3:05 PM
Interesting haiku, If you don' mind quite metalic. Great poem Billt
Goff Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 8:07 PM
enjoyed this fine haiku! Ciara! jimbo
Fraser Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 11:16 AM
Kool Haiku Ciara>>James
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 4:35 AM
Ciara, Fantastic Haiku. Keep the poems coming. We will read. Love, Carol
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July 21, 2009 at 4:16 PM
Interesting thought for the reader to ponder about. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent with us. Best wishes wishes with your writing. Karen
Knox Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 1:18 PM
very nice ciara :)
Pickett Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 11:55 PM
Stones, beautiful stones, Awesome write.... Well written Haiku.....:JP)
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