Metal Fields and Mountain Pinnacles

Copper blooms, titanium too below the iron of the sky
Rich fields of ore, quarried, lay everywhere without a quarrel
In conjunction with all things shiny on the land and rust of day

Mountains pinnacles are miles high
With gold draped cliffs of drifting yellow beads of brass

Green vegetation grows around them to quell their worries
Reaching to be free from electricity, thermal conductivity 
Streams that run along the fields of metal valley mines

Gray with aluminum strands soft and solvent
Punctuate the landscape up above
Anodizing, analyzing, thinking they are zinc
So much of zinc below the solid surface riches
All this to be discerned by proper science expeditions

Metal machines gather what they need to feed their kind
Golden days, silver nights, tongues of tungsten
Wrap themselves around themselves for warmth

Metalloids are not yet born or forged
Malleable to shaping when they come


Some nonmetallic friends stop by to see the young
Marble and silicon are spies
Disclosed, exposed as such
Despised, disposed of for their corrosive side and lies

Platinum dressed in blue arrives
Stays to take a smoke or two
Smoldering in a blistering sun

Smelted, furn-aced for the future
To be tempered into something smooth 
To contemplate the truth with other alloys
Query how all metals can be used
How Earth can hold itself together with the ores
Both in the ground and in the metal fields outside
To lay aside barren lands their souls in sun for warmth 
Metal-tate a way to feel the force
They carry on and need no water

Of course rocks are most jagged and driest on mountain tops
They yield the finest metals, minerals at their pinnacles up there
And where suns furnace first glowed on
Touched the tip of Earth
Up there still, refines, defines the metal fields

                                                   9/22/14 Pinnacle - Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 2:33 PM
multi-dimensional expressions of fields on the rise, earl.. a round of cheers on your win!
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October 12, 2014 at 3:31 PM
Hi Nette, Welcome to my invented metal world. Thank you for your kind words and comments. Congratulations to you on your well deserved win in the contest. Take care. Earl
Guzzi Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 4:16 PM
a fascinating verse which deserves multiple readings. Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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October 11, 2014 at 6:57 PM
Good evening Debbie, Welcome to my metal world. It took many rewrites and shaping to get it right. Thank you so much for your kind words and observations. Congratulations to you too. Thank you for the interesting trip to Peru. Nice win. Good for you. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 11:30 AM
brilliant informative write many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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October 11, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Hi Jan, Welcome to my metal world. Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments. I'm glad you liked it. Have a great week end. Take care. Earl
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem Earl.
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October 11, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much for commenting. Take care. Earl
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October 11, 2014 at 10:02 AM
Hi Maurice. Thank you for visiting my metal world. I'm glad you liked it. I also enjoyed reading your out of world explorations and natures ways here on Earth. Congratulations on your win as well. Take care. Earl
Yvonne Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 9:10 AM
This is really good Earl, Congratulations on your win.
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October 11, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Hi Maurice. Thank you for visiting my metal world. I'm glad you liked it. I also enjoyed reading your out of world explorations and natures ways here on Earth. Congratulations on your win as well. Take care. Earl
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