Messy

May has dawned
with wind and whiskey
and sideways glances

a rendered heart
and maybe a start 
with an eye for details

i would love to see your
entrails up close

if they were spilt and split
with a sigh from the hilt
they would smile with a 
turn from my hand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 1:44 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Shayna. I will be back again soon to read more. Have a wonderful week filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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May 2, 2011 at 5:27 AM
Damn, this was straight awesome.
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