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Messed Up Life

No dreams come true No fairy helps too Just go alone on the way along No way to success All is nonfeasance Just go without knowing the way to go There is no God Who seem to care Just go the way as u go through now No flower on the way All is thorny way Just go as u don't have to stop There is no deity All r just devils Just pushing me back the way too hard No no no there is no one yours All r just for making laugh of yours Being a loser makes me more strong I will shine out on the darkest dawn

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 8/28/2015 1:58:00 PM

Dear Surbhi, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Thank-YOU for supporting contest. Superb Quill. However it does not conform to the format of the contest. Please read my POEM : Afterlife for the format style and try again. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

Surbhi Gupta

Date: 8/26/2015 9:33:00 PM

Hey!! SKAT..I would love to be your friend.Thanks for such welcome.I am happy that I have made friends at very first day.I am from India and hope my poems and quotes will be liked by all..

Skat A

Date: 8/26/2015 1:29:00 PM

Hi Surbhi, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2015 12:55:00 PM

Surbhi, you gave this poem an awesome ending, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Surbhi Gupta
Date: 8/26/2015 9:36:00 PM

Thankyou so much..I am happy that I have got a friend at first day only.I am feeling great at this moment and great to be a part of it.Thanks a lot.Hope you will like all my poems and quotes because it's the first time that I am posting my poems socially.