Messages In the Clouds

Observer of the skies, I thrill to see
a puppy cloud stretch out to dragon length,
a shapeless mass become a well-formed heart,
or pastel puffs become an ice cream cone. 
These sights call forth my best old memories
of playing with my dog and summer treats, 
of how my teen heart fluttered when I wore
my first real boyfriend’s class ring on my chain.

A local man I knew saw doves, the Cross*,
and messages from Jesus in the clouds.
A booklet holds his photos of these scenes.
Revisiting my copy gives me pause.
Why would two long-time Christians like us see
such widely-varied scenes among the clouds?

I’ll bet this man prayed fervently to see
some lovely words and images from God,
who chose to send the answers in the sky.
“Ask and ye shall receive,” the Bible says.
I’m praying, and believing, He’ll reveal
some messages from Heaven in the clouds
to bless my soul and move my heart to sing.

*The Cross upon which Christ was crucified


March 8, 2023
Contest: the Each Passing Cloud Poetry Contest          Placed 2nd
Sponsor: JCB Brul
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Agustin Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 8:24 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.
Canerdy Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 7:22 AM
Beata, thank you so much for your lovely responses! Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story. I have seen angels. I would love to see more. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Canerdy Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 11:20 AM
Thank you so much, Paula! Janice
Turner Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 8:44 AM
Conratulations Janice on your placement:)
Canerdy Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 11:20 AM
Thanks so much, Danny. Janice
Pandit Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 3:53 AM
I like how clouds evoke inspirations of faith and solemn feelings. A lovely take on the contest theme, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 9:33 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 1:39 AM
Yeah we can see so many things in clouds, i know of picttures of the words Allah and Mohammed in arabic that people photographed in clouds formations. >>>>********** Kudos for a lovely superbly written poem!! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too"
Canerdy Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 9:34 AM
Thanks SO much S.zaynab. I certainly will read your poem. Janice
Turner Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 1:38 PM
I have a feeling if he reveals anything it will not be in the clouds but in your heart. I think that's how that works. Probably not news to you:) I still like the poem, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 3:24 PM
I agree, of course, that He can reveal things to my heart, but I also believe in those physical images--in clouds or wherever He chooses to place them. I have the booklet that man produced. Thanks for still liking the poem, Danny. Janice
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