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Messages In the Clouds

Observer of the skies, I thrill to see a puppy cloud stretch out to dragon length, a shapeless mass become a well-formed heart, or pastel puffs become an ice cream cone. These sights call forth my best old memories of playing with my dog and summer treats, of how my teen heart fluttered when I wore my first real boyfriend’s class ring on my chain. A local man I knew saw doves, the Cross*, and messages from Jesus in the clouds. A booklet holds his photos of these scenes. Revisiting my copy gives me pause. Why would two long-time Christians like us see such widely-varied scenes among the clouds? I’ll bet this man prayed fervently to see some lovely words and images from God, who chose to send the answers in the sky. “Ask and ye shall receive,” the Bible says. I’m praying, and believing, He’ll reveal some messages from Heaven in the clouds to bless my soul and move my heart to sing. *The Cross upon which Christ was crucified March 8, 2023 Contest: the Each Passing Cloud Poetry Contest Placed 2nd Sponsor: JCB Brul

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Date: 3/19/2023 8:24:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/20/2023 7:22:00 AM
Beata, thank you so much for your lovely responses! Janice
Date: 3/18/2023 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story. I have seen angels. I would love to see more. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/18/2023 11:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paula! Janice
Date: 3/18/2023 8:44:00 AM
Conratulations Janice on your placement:)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/18/2023 11:20:00 AM
Thanks so much, Danny. Janice
Date: 3/9/2023 3:53:00 AM
I like how clouds evoke inspirations of faith and solemn feelings. A lovely take on the contest theme, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/9/2023 9:33:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 3/9/2023 1:39:00 AM
Yeah we can see so many things in clouds, i know of picttures of the words Allah and Mohammed in arabic that people photographed in clouds formations. >>>>********** Kudos for a lovely superbly written poem!! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too"
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/9/2023 9:34:00 AM
Thanks SO much S.zaynab. I certainly will read your poem. Janice
Date: 3/8/2023 1:38:00 PM
I have a feeling if he reveals anything it will not be in the clouds but in your heart. I think that's how that works. Probably not news to you:) I still like the poem, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/8/2023 3:24:00 PM
I agree, of course, that He can reveal things to my heart, but I also believe in those physical images--in clouds or wherever He chooses to place them. I have the booklet that man produced. Thanks for still liking the poem, Danny. Janice

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