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Born of depth and soul  
A peaceful man rests weary 
Detained with his mind

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Jay Loveless

June 10, 2010 at 10:48 AM

Please get as many people as possible to read Hush Missing Child <3

May 15, 2010 at 12:35 PM

What a thought provoking poem. Yes, he sure was a man of peace, and the world is a better place because of him. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Abe's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

May 12, 2010 at 4:04 AM

Laura, Congratulations on your success in the “From a Birmingham Jail” Contest sponsored by: Abe Lopez with this well said haiku. Your creativity radiates. (PS I hope to remember to mail a note that I wrote to you when I walk this morning. Thank you for your writing and friendship.) Lovingly, Dane Ann

Andrew Crisci

May 9, 2010 at 9:58 AM

Congratulations, Laura on your Honorable Mention in Abe's contest. Happy Mother's Day. Enjoy your victory and honor. I wish you continued success. Love and hugs, Andrew.

Andrea Dietrich

May 8, 2010 at 6:23 PM

Congratulations on your HM, Laura! LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

May 6, 2010 at 1:41 PM

a thoughtful write congrad's on your win! Light & Love

James Fraser

May 6, 2010 at 11:32 AM

Terrific poem Laura, it says so much. Many congratulations on your win in Abe's fine contest >> James

Jimmy Anderson

May 6, 2010 at 8:10 AM

Hey Laura, Congrats on your HM in the contest....and thnx for the comment on my writes.....Jimmy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 5, 2010 at 8:25 PM

Congrats Laura on your HM in Abe's contest on MLK with this excellent expression of the photo presented.. enjoy your honor my sweet friend... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Abe Lopez

May 5, 2010 at 8:14 PM

thank you for supporting my contest Laura, congrats on your HM

Sue Mason

April 30, 2010 at 5:23 PM

Is this for the Birmingham Jail picture contest? Well its surely a winner as I can see the picture through your words!! Excellent write, Laura.

Travis Tapley

April 28, 2010 at 6:12 PM

What a wonderful write. I loved the first line. Heck, I loved it all! So much said here in these lines. Sometimes the simple task of thinking too much can make us weary. We might be peaceful in nature, but a nagging thought can cause turmoil.