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Message To the Youth of Rap Culture

insight into my insides
find and fight 
blinding light on the inflight
while others fly blind
reaching for stars and losing sight

words can be a fake display of might
or be used to increase the capacity of your mind
search and find
no definition to define
the way you can shine within a single rhyme
change the perception of others in a single line
if you truly desire peace
than stop writing about committing crimes!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/29/2014 3:57:00 PM
I love this one and its message..I love it when I can get a glimpse of who you are through words.Adding it to my fvs.
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 12/2/2014 5:13:00 PM
He's mixed with chihuahua, the other half I'm not sure of. Lovely to see you :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/30/2014 4:47:00 PM
Is he a chiuahua?I had one back home..Lovely.
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 11/29/2014 10:25:00 PM
Yes that is one of my dogs. His name is bear. He's the smallest of the four :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/29/2014 10:20:00 PM
Is this your dog?Wuf Wuf how sweet : )
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 11/29/2014 4:03:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine. You always warm my soul when you say that you're adding it to your favs that and your avatar :)
Date: 11/29/2014 1:49:00 PM
well stated my friend..Too many use shock to sell more downloads..
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 11/29/2014 1:59:00 PM
Exactly!

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