Message In the Bottle

______
                                        \           /
                                     my thoughts
                                     have reached
                                     your heart, li-
                                     ke a solo star
                                     that's wishe-
                                     d on for mira-
                                     cles. I pray y-
                                     our well my lo-
                                   ve, yet guarded wit-
                                hin my mind,  my soul is
                              close. Like a star that gleam
                             in a flash we share the  same 
                            desires, though miles apart, so
                            now our bliss  souls rest oceans                          away, our
                            fine love still shinning-----When                    my message
                            finds you at the shore line, I pr-               ay you
                            read it in time, I admire you an-                       d adorn 
                            you with my joyful tears. The da-           y nice 
                            to us, possibly this note will find                       you
                            walking bare feet along the shor -    eline sand
                            a wine bottle among your feet un-                      expected
                            your soul will find me-----through              light
                            years. I pray you place your love inside this
   blissful star,         return to the water, 
and I will     hope one day soon,
i get to hold you                     near~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
my soul ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
             my gracious love~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 
   one day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vinson Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 3:07 PM
A worthy message, Trice. : )
Jackson Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 5:33 PM
Thank you Doug I'm glad you enjoyed my poem
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 11:14 AM
What a great concrete poem. Wonderful!
Jackson Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Dane... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem... God bless
Leachet Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 5:14 PM
This is very creative and well written. I love the bottle and the poem as a whole, it all goes together nicely.
Jackson Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 6:32 PM
Thank you Tatiana God bless you... I'm glad you enjoyed my poems...
Neumann Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 12:48 AM
I like this bottle. Visual clarity and content, I like this, Kai
Jackson Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Thank you Kai I'm glad you enjoy my poem god bless
Gupta Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 6:14 AM
Beautiful, Patrice ... a nice poetry ... pearls of thought ... beautifully cultured...
Jackson Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Thank you Probir... I'm glad you enjoyed... God bless
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 2:38 AM
Oh! I see creativity screaming aloud. Well crafted, Patrice. A 7.
Jackson Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 2:47 AM
Thank you Adeniji I'm glad you enjoy my poem
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