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Message In the Bottle

______ \ / my thoughts have reached your heart, li- ke a solo star that's wishe- d on for mira- cles. I pray y- our well my lo- ve, yet guarded wit- hin my mind, my soul is close. Like a star that gleam in a flash we share the same desires, though miles apart, so now our bliss souls rest oceans away, our fine love still shinning-----When my message finds you at the shore line, I pr- ay you read it in time, I admire you an- d adorn you with my joyful tears. The da- y nice to us, possibly this note will find you walking bare feet along the shor - eline sand a wine bottle among your feet un- expected your soul will find me-----through light years. I pray you place your love inside this blissful star, return to the water, and I will hope one day soon, i get to hold you near~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ my soul ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ my gracious love~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ one day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Date: 4/6/2017 3:07:00 PM
A worthy message, Trice. : )
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 5/25/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thank you Doug I'm glad you enjoyed my poem
Date: 1/14/2017 11:14:00 AM
What a great concrete poem. Wonderful!
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 1/14/2017 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Dane... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem... God bless
Date: 1/6/2017 5:14:00 PM
This is very creative and well written. I love the bottle and the poem as a whole, it all goes together nicely.
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 1/10/2017 6:32:00 PM
Thank you Tatiana God bless you... I'm glad you enjoyed my poems...
Date: 12/29/2016 12:48:00 AM
I like this bottle. Visual clarity and content, I like this, Kai
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 12/29/2016 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Kai I'm glad you enjoy my poem god bless
Date: 12/27/2016 6:14:00 AM
Beautiful, Patrice ... a nice poetry ... pearls of thought ... beautifully cultured...
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 12/27/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Probir... I'm glad you enjoyed... God bless
Date: 12/27/2016 2:38:00 AM
Oh! I see creativity screaming aloud. Well crafted, Patrice. A 7.
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 12/27/2016 2:47:00 AM
Thank you Adeniji I'm glad you enjoy my poem

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