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Message In An Acrostic Contest Premiere Contest Winner

So Sweet

Since you came into my life, I can tell you true
Only pleasing you is all I want to do!

Sugar I’ll be giving you every day and night.
When you waken, I will greet you with my sweet delight.
Embracing you, I’ll be your minX, eXactly what you need.
Enjoyment, like chocolates in a boX I’ll give to please
The man I love. Honey, just relaX; eXpect lots and lots of these!


Jan. 19,2017 for  Kim Rodrigues' Message in an Acrostic Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 9/3/2021 7:37:00 AM
wonderful executed write, Andrea, no wonder Kim chose it.
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Date: 8/29/2021 9:43:00 AM
Andrea, Paris is right, this Acrostic shows such an adorable side! So sweet indeed, love it when the comments read like a who's who of PoetrySoup. -Richard
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Date: 8/25/2021 8:25:00 AM
Very sweet, cute and clever :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/25/2021 9:32:00 AM
hey, how are you seeing this?? It looks like I got a trophy for it and I don't even remember this!!
Date: 4/1/2020 1:02:00 PM
Clever hidden message from the Romantic Realist! Love it, going into my faves ~ John
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Date: 4/17/2018 12:36:00 AM
So sweet, Andrea.
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:39:00 PM
Wow! Brilliant!
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Date: 2/18/2017 8:35:00 PM
Very good!
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Date: 1/24/2017 8:51:00 AM
Clever and witty as always, great job on the hidden message.
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Date: 1/22/2017 7:44:00 PM
Very creative and clever with the added X's. I see why this took the trophy Andrea. Big Congratulations my friend! 7 ; )
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Date: 1/22/2017 11:23:00 AM
Clever hidden teXt. X-cellent! Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea! :-)
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Date: 1/22/2017 8:44:00 AM
Congrats Andrea. Fabulous composition and a wise one! :)
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Date: 1/22/2017 7:05:00 AM
Very clever and worthy of top win, Andrea:) congratulations:)
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Date: 1/22/2017 12:58:00 AM
Superb piece my dear friend, Andrea! Sweet Congrats on your well-deserved trophy win! Hugs and cheers!
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Date: 1/21/2017 9:46:00 PM
Cleverly composed. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/21/2017 9:11:00 PM
Lots of kissessssss and Hugs Congratulations on your 1st place win Hugs & Kisses
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Date: 1/21/2017 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, a well-woven acrostic. Scanning through the replies, I really like Robert's. Neat thought!
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Date: 1/21/2017 6:38:00 PM
I wrote you a long congratulatory message that included my realization about your X's; they aren't used as an adult only rating, they are sweet kisses! I missed that completely yesterday. Anyway, I came back and found my message notm so here it is again, just not exactly the same. Hold that gold - may it never get old. Love ya ... CayCay
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Date: 1/21/2017 5:51:00 PM
He lives in heaven.
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Date: 1/21/2017 5:46:00 PM
As sweet as chocolate. Beautiful. Congrats.
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Date: 1/21/2017 5:31:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 1/21/2017 4:39:00 PM
Well done Andrea. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/21/2017 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea, absolutely brilliant piece.
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Date: 1/21/2017 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations Andy!!! :) Big Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 1/21/2017 3:12:00 PM
many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2017 3:10:00 PM
Your first, Andrea, because you made me smile, a big smile! This was so cute! I love the sounds as I read the poem, and I can just picture all the kisses! Congrats on your top win!!
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