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Premiere Contest WinnerMessage In An Acrostic Contest

So Sweet

Since you came into my life, I can tell you true
Only pleasing you is all I want to do!

Sugar I’ll be giving you every day and night.
When you waken, I will greet you with my sweet delight.
Embracing you, I’ll be your minX, eXactly what you need.
Enjoyment, like chocolates in a boX I’ll give to please
The man I love. Honey, just relaX; eXpect lots and lots of these!


Jan. 19,2017 for  Kim Rodrigues' Message in an Acrostic Contest
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Roper Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 7:37 AM
wonderful executed write, Andrea, no wonder Kim chose it.
Theraven Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Andrea, Paris is right, this Acrostic shows such an adorable side! So sweet indeed, love it when the comments read like a who's who of PoetrySoup. -Richard
Boreham Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 8:25 AM
Very sweet, cute and clever :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 9:32 AM
hey, how are you seeing this?? It looks like I got a trophy for it and I don't even remember this!!
Watt Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 1:02 PM
Clever hidden message from the Romantic Realist! Love it, going into my faves ~ John
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:36 AM
So sweet, Andrea.
Pran Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:39 PM
Wow! Brilliant!
Konos Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 8:35 PM
Very good!
Walker Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Clever and witty as always, great job on the hidden message.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 7:44 PM
Very creative and clever with the added X's. I see why this took the trophy Andrea. Big Congratulations my friend! 7 ; )
Martin Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 11:23 AM
Clever hidden teXt. X-cellent! Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea! :-)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Congrats Andrea. Fabulous composition and a wise one! :)
Daniel Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Very clever and worthy of top win, Andrea:) congratulations:)
Gasun Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 12:58 AM
Superb piece my dear friend, Andrea! Sweet Congrats on your well-deserved trophy win! Hugs and cheers!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 9:46 PM
Cleverly composed. Congratulations.
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Lots of kissessssss and Hugs Congratulations on your 1st place win Hugs & Kisses
Poteet Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, a well-woven acrostic. Scanning through the replies, I really like Robert's. Neat thought!
Godwin Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 6:38 PM
I wrote you a long congratulatory message that included my realization about your X's; they aren't used as an adult only rating, they are sweet kisses! I missed that completely yesterday. Anyway, I came back and found my message notm so here it is again, just not exactly the same. Hold that gold - may it never get old. Love ya ... CayCay
Johnson Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 5:51 PM
He lives in heaven.
Capitano Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 5:46 PM
As sweet as chocolate. Beautiful. Congrats.
May Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 5:31 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
Murray Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 4:39 PM
Well done Andrea. Congratulations!
Pett Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Congratulations Andrea, absolutely brilliant piece.
Burch Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations Andy!!! :) Big Hugggs. Deb
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 3:12 PM
many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 3:10 PM
Your first, Andrea, because you made me smile, a big smile! This was so cute! I love the sounds as I read the poem, and I can just picture all the kisses! Congrats on your top win!!
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