Jimmy Anderson Poet Nonet

Message In a Bottle - Jinn - Jimmy

If you're reading this message beware.
I was trapped in here centuries.
I've escaped into the air.
I'm roaming in the breeze.
Freedom paid by fare.
Hope I won't freeze.
I am rare.
Hear sneeze?
Jinn

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 8, 2011 at 10:34 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win Jimmy. Love, Carol

Kash Poet March 8, 2011 at 9:10 AM Congrats Jimmy on your big win in the contest of Linda!--kashinath

Tahera Mannan March 8, 2011 at 12:44 AM Super congratulations for this win dear friend.

Sharon Ruebel March 7, 2011 at 10:57 AM Hello Jimmy, Congratulations on your win in the contest with this very witty write. I enjoyed this one very much..... As Always, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 7, 2011 at 8:32 AM Congrats on your win with this unique take Jimmy!

Wilma Neels March 7, 2011 at 3:56 AM Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest Jimmy :)

Tahera Mannan March 7, 2011 at 12:17 AM Super one Jimmy. Loved it. many congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2011 at 10:52 PM A fun read, Jimmy. Congratulations.

John Freeman March 6, 2011 at 5:42 PM Great to see you in the top ten Jimmy. Congratulations on your worthy 6th place honor. Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick March 6, 2011 at 3:25 PM Congratulations on your fine sixth Place win in the contest, JAM. Love, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta March 6, 2011 at 2:19 PM Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, Jimmy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 6, 2011 at 12:18 PM Congrats Jimmy on your success in my contest.. excellent message luv.. thankxx for your constant support...

Deb Wilson March 6, 2011 at 12:15 AM You are "rare" and this is awesome! Good luck in the contest...Love,Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 4, 2011 at 6:02 AM thankxx for supporting my current contest Jimmy.. good luck... will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of this piece luv.. happy weekend..

Carolyn Devonshire March 3, 2011 at 4:29 PM By the way, you really are "rare." And that's a compliment!

Carolyn Devonshire March 3, 2011 at 4:28 PM Jimmy, you have taken the contest to a whole new level. I know you were speaking of your own life and you have "paid." Love you, brother, Carolyn

Audrey Haick March 3, 2011 at 2:27 PM lol! Delightful one, JAM. Glad I caught this one. Best of luck with this even though not necessary..destiny calls a winner. Love, Annalise

Joe Maverick March 3, 2011 at 1:36 PM a livley write, thank you for your comment.

Francine Roberts March 3, 2011 at 1:03 PM cute, I like it, good luck in the contest