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Message In a Bottle - Help - Bob

I've been marooned on this isle for months
Sharks circle here licking their chops
Haven't had very much grub
Just some coconut meat
No gals in grass skirts
Tsunami near
Oh dear me
Ahoy
Help

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 5 in Linda-Marie's "Message In A Bottle" Contest - March 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

March 8, 2011 at 10:32 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win Robert. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

March 8, 2011 at 9:05 AM

Wonderful write from you Robert!Congrats on your win!---kashinath

Tahera Mannan

March 8, 2011 at 12:43 AM

Super congratulations for this win dear friend.

Sharon Ruebel

March 7, 2011 at 10:52 AM

Hello Robert, Congratulations on your successful win in this contest. This is so witty and fun I love it! As Always, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 7, 2011 at 8:31 AM

coming back here to say Congrats on this very fun write Bob :)

Wilma Neels

March 7, 2011 at 3:48 AM

Hehe, what a joy to read this one again Bob!! Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest.. Enjoy the week ahead :)

Tahera Mannan

March 7, 2011 at 12:13 AM

haha a really good one. many congrats for this win.

John Freeman

March 6, 2011 at 5:36 PM

So great to see you in the top five in this one Bob. Congratulations on your worthy fifth place honored poem. Agape, Moses

John Freeman

March 6, 2011 at 5:36 PM

So great to see you in the top five in this one Bob. Congratulations on your worthy fifth place honored poem. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

March 6, 2011 at 3:54 PM

robert, a trophy for you and big COMGRATS for the super win..:) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick

March 6, 2011 at 3:22 PM

Congratulations on your fine 5th Place win in Linda's contest, Bob. Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 6, 2011 at 2:16 PM

Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Linda, Bob

Michael J. Falotico

March 6, 2011 at 12:59 PM

Congratsm my friend and poet.. well done and well deserved...Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 6, 2011 at 12:15 PM

Congrats Bob on your success in my contest.. excellent message luv.. thankxx for your ever constant support...

Wilma Neels

March 5, 2011 at 12:15 PM

Oh my word, you sure have a wee bit of a problem Mr. H.. Hopefully home is on the way :) Always enjoy your humor. All the best for Linda's contest :) Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 5, 2011 at 11:45 AM

oh noooo!! Yikes I hope help got to you in time, Bob!! Super enjoyed reading this Bob,, Linda sure has some amazing entries :)!

Michael J. Falotico

March 5, 2011 at 6:48 AM

Great write my friend!!! Either way I will get you the football sores lol Enjoy your weekend my Poet friend...

Debbie Guzzi

March 4, 2011 at 1:59 PM

hey NO address LOL..Light & Love

Ralph Taylor

March 4, 2011 at 10:36 AM

Excellent entry, Sarge. Enjoyed. Good luck. Have a super weekend. Ralphie

Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2011 at 8:15 AM

A good and fun one!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 4, 2011 at 5:25 AM

thankxx for supporting my current contest Bob ...good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of the piece luv..happy weekend..

Sharon Ruebel

March 3, 2011 at 4:00 PM

Hello Bob, OMG I am still laughing! This is so funny, you sir are a very cleaver poet....... Looks like a winner to me As Always, Shar

John Loving Iii

March 3, 2011 at 3:37 PM

ok robertson carouso. jhlovingiii

Carolyn Devonshire

March 3, 2011 at 1:13 PM

You had me giggling, Bob. If you ever find yourself in this predicament, make a spear from the coconut trees and try to kill some sharks. They'll at least keep you alive...until the tsunami hits! Funny poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn (I really was called "weird Carolyn" for the reasons described in the poem. LOL Best wishes in the contest -- it would be hard to top this one! Love, Carolyn

Jimmy Anderson

March 3, 2011 at 1:08 PM

Very funny Bob...good luck in the contest. Jimmy

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