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Message In a Bottle - Bye - Annalise

Well, I have loved all of you guys much
Had lots of fun, some grief and tears
Looking back I did the best
At least I hope I have
Yet much still undone
Will know for sure 
In a minute
Or two
Bye!

~*~

For Linda's "Message In a Bottle" Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

March 8, 2011 at 10:31 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win Annalise. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

March 8, 2011 at 9:03 AM

Wonderful write here Annalise!Congrats on your big win!-kashinath

Tahera Mannan

March 8, 2011 at 12:43 AM

Super congratulations for this win dear friend.

Sharon Ruebel

March 7, 2011 at 10:51 AM

Hello Annalise, This is such a precious message left. I love this one, Congratulations on your win in the contest. It is wonderful..... Lov, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 7, 2011 at 8:30 AM

Very nice take on the challenge Annalise :) congrats on your win :)

Wilma Neels

March 7, 2011 at 3:47 AM

Annalise congratulations on your win in Linda's contest. Tell me did you get the email I send you over the weekend?? love Wilma

Tahera Mannan

March 7, 2011 at 12:13 AM

A super take on this theme. many congrats for this win.

Deb Wilson

March 6, 2011 at 8:29 PM

congrats on your win for this sweet and funny piece!..love,Deb

Andrea Dietrich

March 6, 2011 at 6:46 PM

It really is cool to see peoples' personalities emerge thru these messages. Yours is great. congratulations!

John Freeman

March 6, 2011 at 5:34 PM

So great to see you at the top in this one Annalise. Congratulations on your worthy fourth place honored poem. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

March 6, 2011 at 3:52 PM

awwhh, heart-tugging! roses for your for the thrilling win, anna..:) huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 6, 2011 at 2:15 PM

Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Linda, Annalise

Michael J. Falotico

March 6, 2011 at 12:58 PM

Congrats my dear poet friend on a well deserved win...luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 6, 2011 at 12:14 PM

Congrats Annalise on your success in my contest.. excellent message luv.. thankxx for your wonderful support...

Michael J. Falotico

March 6, 2011 at 7:39 AM

Great form and great words shared... just check the spelling in your title (Bottle).. best of luck for you in the contest...luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 4, 2011 at 5:57 AM

thankxxx Annalise for supporting my current contest luv.. good luck.. need for u to put a hyphen in your title after the word Bye - Annalise ..it needs to read this way for the competition ... so it reads.. Message in a Bottle - Bye - Annalise ...thankxx and happy weekend..my friend..

Sara Kendrick

March 3, 2011 at 4:21 PM

Good luck in the contest with this very creative work..Enjoyed reading it this eve..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

March 3, 2011 at 4:18 PM

Annalise, I hope I never get an email from you like this. When I read the title, I jumped to conclusions. So glad it's for the contest -- definitely a winner. You write very well in the nonet form. Don't think I've ever tried one. Bob Hinshaw's entry was a riot. I'll be pulling for both of you to win in this contest! Love, Carolyn

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