Joe Flach Poet Nonet

Message In a Bottle - Burp - Joe

This bottle once was full of cold beer
Now only this dumb note is here
The author’s mind not so clear
Message garbled, I fear
Hoping land is near
Trying to steer
Must now veer
Oh Dear
Burp

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 8, 2011 at 10:37 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win Joe. Love, Carol

Kash Poet March 8, 2011 at 9:13 AM Funny write Joe,enjoyed!Congrats on your win in the contest of Linda!---kashinath

Tahera Mannan March 8, 2011 at 12:45 AM Super congratulations for this win dear friend.

Carolyn Devonshire March 7, 2011 at 2:09 PM You're so funny, Joe. Keep us laughing! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Sharon Ruebel March 7, 2011 at 11:18 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest Joe, this is witty and fun. I love it. As Always, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 7, 2011 at 8:33 AM Congrats on your win with this fun & witty nonet Joe :)

Wilma Neels March 7, 2011 at 4:04 AM Oh dear and congratulations Joe all in one breath before I burp :)

Tahera Mannan March 7, 2011 at 12:19 AM Haha. Good funny message. many congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2011 at 10:53 PM Joe, yours was priceless!! congrats

John Freeman March 6, 2011 at 5:45 PM Great to see you in the top ten Joe. Congratulations on your worthy 6th place honor. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud March 6, 2011 at 3:59 PM here's to another mug for the great win, joe.. CONGRATS! :) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick March 6, 2011 at 3:26 PM Congratulations on you fine sixth place win in the contest, Joe. Double congrats. Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta March 6, 2011 at 2:20 PM Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, Joe

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 6, 2011 at 12:20 PM Congrats Joe on your success in my contest.. excellent message luv.. thankxx for your support always...

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2011 at 8:18 AM hahaha, great how you did yours!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 4, 2011 at 5:59 AM thankxx for supporting my current contest Joe.. good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of this piece ..luv.. happy weekend..

Ellen Fahey March 3, 2011 at 3:50 PM Hahaha! Good one! Good luck! Ellen

Francine Roberts March 3, 2011 at 2:05 PM too funny, best of luck in the contest Joe