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Message In a Bottle- Blank - Robb Kopp

Covered with sand and barnacles too
A plastic bottle turning blue
found a treasure in my hand
I cleaned layers of sand
Inside a note hid
unscrewed the lid
out it slid
heart sank
blank

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Carol Sunshine Brown

March 8, 2011 at 10:25 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place win Robb. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

March 8, 2011 at 8:45 AM

Very nice ending here,Robb!Congrats on your big win!!--kashinath

Tahera Mannan

March 8, 2011 at 12:40 AM

I knew this would do great. Super congratulations for this win dear friend.

Sharon Ruebel

March 7, 2011 at 10:40 AM

Hello Robb, very witty indeed. Congratulations on your well deserved win....This is wonderful As Always, Shar

Wilma Neels

March 7, 2011 at 3:24 AM

Awe sucks, I love how you twisted this one Robb, honoured to be sharing 1st place with you :) Wilma

Tahera Mannan

March 7, 2011 at 12:06 AM

What a fantastic take on this theme. many congrats for this win.

Gwendolen Song

March 6, 2011 at 11:19 PM

Bravo!!!!! Well-deserved first place! Now, let's talk about this blank message in the bottle....what kind of a cruel joke was that? Comparable to a million dollar lottery ticket with an expiration date, huh?! Loved your poem. Great ending! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

March 6, 2011 at 6:39 PM

Gosh, I missed this one somehow. I can see how it placed high. Congratulations, Robb.

John Freeman

March 6, 2011 at 5:24 PM

So great to see you at the top in this one Robb. Congratulations on your worthy first place honored poem. Agape, Moses

Cecil Hickman

March 6, 2011 at 5:13 PM

congratulations on your first place win in the contest,this venture would be a great disappointment to say the least,it would also be a great joke to play on someone maybe even in a different way,,imagine if within the pyramids or even ancient jars there would be a parchment with no words at all,,, could you imagine the expressions on all the archeologists faces,,and I want to thank you for all your words that you have left behind after reading mine,,Blessings..Cecil