Message In a Bottle

A dream, a silent passing hope
Once to me as all
At drift upon the highest tide
Rise, oh waking call
Break upon a sleeping shore
Rise, oh soul, arise
The ocean calls to free the soul
So bound within your eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:03 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Christopher. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 8:05 PM
very nice, Christopher. congrats on the HM
Taylor Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 5:23 PM
Congrats on your HM, Chris. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
Mehta Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian, Christopher
Hendricks Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 11:26 PM
Ahoy, me hearrrrtie. Yer be a-longin' fer th' big briny? Cap'n's orders: git yer scurvy self ter yer port o' call an' join 'em no-good sea-farin' scallywags. Arrrgh. Nice one, Christopher. I like the gentle flow in here. :))
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