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Message In a Bottle

a long way to go like a raft in the ocean .. destination known yet ... unknown ..wherever it leads / message in a bottle ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- this one actually has 2different meanings 1 - some people have difficulies with expressing their feelings keepingtheirselfs closed .. and they follow a long road before they open . 2 - "destination known ... yet ... unkown " no matter where the wind takes you , better places will be found .. its not good to plan your life .. just let it go wherever it is taking you to

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Date: 9/30/2009 9:03:00 PM
I guess you could say desination known, I mean it is going to beach somewhere on land, but yeah, no one knows where. It is prone to the elements and the currents. But you can be sure someone eventually is going to get that message. :) Nice write, thought provoking for me. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 9/19/2009 7:45:00 PM
Enjoyed this interesting write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/19/2009 12:45:00 PM
This tanka is deep in meaning, I left you some soup mail...
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