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Message in a bottle

I was alone on the beach, Just me and the waves. The wind among the trees, The sand tickling my feet. I put a message in a bottle Threw it wide, It was bobbing on the waves, Till it disappeared out of sight. I stood gazing, At the vast blue ocean, Waiting for someone, Who would answer my, Message in a bottle.

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Date: 2/25/2019 11:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Apurva.
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Apurva Prabhudesai
Date: 3/4/2019 12:23:00 AM
Thanks a lot!
Date: 2/17/2019 4:51:00 PM
what lovely imagery Apurva, I wonder how many of these messages in a bottle ever get a reply:-) hugs Jan xx
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Apurva Prabhudesai
Date: 3/4/2019 12:23:00 AM
Thanks!