Message In a Bottle

In June of 1886,
A German sailor tossed
A bottle with a message
Overboard, where it got lost.

The ship, en route to Indonesia,
Left from Cardiff, Wales,
The bottle an experiment
To track the currents’ trails.

A woman walking on the shore
This January glanced
Upon the sand and what she saw
Immediately entranced – 

An old glass bottle poking through
A stark Australian beach;
She brought it home and found inside
A scroll that she could reach.

She dried it in the oven
And the message was revealed,
One hundred thirty-one long years
From when it first was sealed.

It merely told where it was from
And asked for its return,
So scientists could analyze
Its journey and could learn.

A message in a bottle
Has a singular mystique,
Like a hole cut in the fabric
Of the past, where we can peek.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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March 13, 2018 at 2:14 PM
Amazing story and so well written. In the case of being stranded, certainly a last ditch effort! The author never knew it was found! Thoughts to ponder! Another gem from you. Thanks!!!.......................80)
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March 11, 2018 at 4:43 PM
:) What an incredible story this is. What a find. I wonder if she got paid for it. Love your poetry, dear. Messages in a bottle have always been intriguing.
Godwin Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Sometimes I think there needs to be a section on the poem submission form for 'fact' or 'fiction'. This is one of those times, and I'm going to go with truth. Fascinating and delivered in your crisp, flowing, engaging style. False? Ohhh Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Bauer Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 8:53 PM
Hey CayCay! I think there should be a category called "In the News," because that's where I get a lot of my inspiration (including this story). Thank you for your support!
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 6:36 PM
what a fascinating story how remarkable it lasted for so long in the seas and was eventually found!:-) hugs jan xx
Bauer Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Hi Jan! Yes, I thought it was very cool that it was found after so long. Too bad it didn't have a more interesting message, though. It made me wonder what I'd write...
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