Deb Wilson Poet Acrostic

Message For My Valentine

YOU are the breath I breathe,it's true.
ARE  my wishes to love you hung on a star?
MY  arms ache for you,love,hear my cry!
ONE day you'll see what fate has done.
AND our love runs  deep like water through sand.
ONLY you can lead me from lonely!



This is a message to my love  telling him that he's my one and only!

for contest"My Valentine" with an enclosed secret message

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Deborah Burch January 28, 2013 at 4:26 PM Well done Deb. Congratulations on your win!! Woohoo!!:) big Huggss deb

Nicole Sharon Brown January 27, 2013 at 11:57 AM What a loving message! Congrats on the win!

Len Gasun January 26, 2013 at 10:18 PM Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear friend, Deb! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora

Connie Marcum Wong January 26, 2013 at 9:32 PM Amazing win. Congratulations!

Poet Destroyer A January 26, 2013 at 4:48 PM Deb... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA

Audrey Haick January 26, 2013 at 1:56 PM Congratulations on your very fine win, Deb! A true gem! Love, Annalise

Olusegun Arowolo January 26, 2013 at 11:03 AM Congrats on your superb win in this contest...Great write...

Debbie Guzzi January 26, 2013 at 10:38 AM Congrad's on your win in this contest it wasn't an easy challenge![Finally I can see the message LOL..hugs!] Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux January 26, 2013 at 8:28 AM Congrats on win, I enjoyed your poem.

Wilma Neels January 24, 2013 at 10:40 AM Deb; I just love this write of yours ;)

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2013 at 4:57 PM very sweet. ME LIKES>

Russell Sivey January 21, 2013 at 4:39 PM This is a wonderful and intriguing write Deb, I loved reading this poem this evening, What a harmonious piece, Great work!!

Poet Destroyer A January 21, 2013 at 2:25 PM oooo... Nice nice " ;-) this poem is great to read with Valentine approaching ... hope he gets the enclosed message...xox~LINDA