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Message Delivered

on the window sill
        sits a blown, delicate leaf
             message delivered



Heidi Sands

3/19/21

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Panagiota Romios

March 27, 2021 at 2:36 PM

Very picturesque, Heidi, a fav. Pangie xx

Heidi Sands

March 27, 2021 at 3:27 PM

Thank you Pangie. I appreciate you considered it a Fav. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Linda Alice Fowler

March 22, 2021 at 12:22 PM

Great haiku Heidi! Linda

Heidi Sands

March 22, 2021 at 12:26 PM

Thank you Linda :)

Judy Ball

March 21, 2021 at 2:59 AM

Super write. So much said in so few lines. Love it. Great job. A winner for sure. God Bless, JB

Heidi Sands

March 21, 2021 at 5:48 AM

Hi Judy. Thank you so much. I hadn't written this for a contest, but I appreciate your support. God Bless you :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 20, 2021 at 12:00 PM

How tender a message! Excellent, my dearest, Heidi! Hugs xxx

Heidi Sands

March 20, 2021 at 12:35 PM

Thank you Demetrios. I hope all is well. Hugs :)

Quoth Theraven

March 20, 2021 at 10:16 AM

Hello Heidi, First day of Spring, so welcomed in your poem. Enjoyed the message from the seasons. -Richard

Heidi Sands

March 20, 2021 at 10:48 AM

I am happy you enjoyed the message Richard. Thank you :)

Joseph May

March 20, 2021 at 9:49 AM

Love the last line Heidi, Very nicely done

Heidi Sands

March 20, 2021 at 9:56 AM

Great to hear that Joseph. Thank you :)

Carolyn Devonshire

March 19, 2021 at 3:00 PM

Wow! Superb haiku, Heidi. It's been very windy here and leaves are everywhere. On my window sill last night sat a big, green toad. He was so friendly he even left a "deposit" for me on the sill. Enjoyed your haiku. If for the contest, best wishes for success! Hugs, Carolyn

Heidi Sands

March 25, 2021 at 6:36 AM

Oh my gosh. I just see your comment now, about the lizard on the window sill. I bet that was a shocking bite.!

Carolyn Devonshire

March 21, 2021 at 1:51 PM

Heidi, there was once a lizard I didn't see when I went to shut a window. It bit me! Was shocked. Didn't even know they had teeth.

Heidi Sands

March 20, 2021 at 8:39 AM

Thank you so much Carolyn. No, it wasn't for a contest, but I appreciate your support. Wow, a toad on your sill! I haven't seen that. But I had a squirrel jumping up on one of them this winter. I hope you have a nice day. Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

March 19, 2021 at 1:25 PM

This is lovely, Heidi. I like how the last line takes a turn.

Heidi Sands

March 19, 2021 at 1:36 PM

Thanks so much Vijay :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 19, 2021 at 12:55 PM

- ... came out to play ... spring is here soon :) - Did I tell you that my childhood friend was called Heidi (?) ... we were together every day from we were 5- 17 years ... we lost contact many years ago :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

March 19, 2021 at 1:36 PM

Hi Anne-Lise. No, I didn't know that. Interesting! Thank you for coming by and I do hope spring is soon. hugs :)