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Mesmerizing Mountain Caves

Last year ,our family of eight Made plans to head straight For the hills housing the caves During the kids summer break Amidst good cheer,abundant frolic The young ones climbed hoppity skip The older were a tad slow With peppy, resolute spirits though It took us nearly half a day Trudging up the maze like way None did let out a sigh Our goals set mighty and high Sunset past, it got dark But did manage to reach at last The entrance of the heavenly caves Oh! Straight out of some fairy tale! Inside the sanctum just across The magnificent Shiva, the Hindu God The caves within radiant and bright Simply took us by surprise In the hour of night A brilliant ,golden sunrise! Now resubmitted for Contest Mountains Sponsored by Julie Rodeheaver Date Aug 14 2017

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Date: 8/18/2017 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Sushma ~*
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your top wIn Sushma!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/17/2017 4:27:00 AM
Thanks, Connie :) Good to reconnect after long!
Date: 8/16/2017 8:00:00 AM
Sounds like a lovely trip, Sushma! Congrats!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/16/2017 8:05:00 AM
Thanks, Kim! Never been there though; poem based on hearsay:)
Date: 8/16/2017 7:50:00 AM
A great mountain rhymer, Sushma. Well done.
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/16/2017 7:52:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words, Lin!
Date: 8/16/2017 3:25:00 AM
What a wonderful adventure ... I wish to have been there! Expertly-penned and well-deserved win, Sushma ... I love this! Congrats! :-)
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/16/2017 4:21:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/1/2016 3:19:00 PM
Well weaved
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/2/2016 12:10:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/1/2016 10:35:00 AM
very mesmerizing poem Sushma;) goodluck
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/2/2016 12:09:00 AM
Thanks, Madhupriya. Very heartening comments!

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