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Mesmerized

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Awestruck I stood there Mesmerized A strange unearthly melody Mysterious yet so familiar Musical notes not meant solely for my ears Pure gold nectar engulfing my heart Caressing and enchanting my soul Angels or beings from the other side Surely created this heavenly chant Like a rainfall of aromatic petals Awakening my senses Soothing and healing bruises I forgot I had The symphony sways me, transports me As barriers seem to suddenly vanish To open infinite dimensions As on an astral trip Back home to visit And one day to return AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on December 21, 2018 for contest 2019 POETRY MARATHON MILE 1 sponsored by MARK TONEY and on September 5, 2017 for CONTEST NO.330 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 4/22/2018 12:58:00 PM
a very vivid portrayal of how such an event would seem! I see my birthday here for when you submitted it to a contest. I can't even remember how I spent my last year's birthday!!
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Date: 4/22/2018 2:05:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea. Much appreciated. Happy belated bday!
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Date: 4/22/2018 2:05:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea. Much appreciated. Happy belated bday!

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