Mesmerized

If I had to write your beauty would it stand 
the test of time eyes bright like the midnight 
star lips soft like silk body hot like the desert 
curve like she works for black berry 
movement full of grace she may not have a 
crown on her head but she is my princess
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 5, 2013 at 9:14 AM
Jedidah. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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May 26, 2013 at 9:24 AM
Very lovely....
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May 26, 2013 at 4:59 AM
very nice piece! Welcome to the soup. Kim
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May 26, 2013 at 3:50 AM
A enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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