Laura Breidenthal Poet Lyric

Mesmerized

You’ll never know how much you speak to me
I just can’t fathom the beauty that I see
Your heart goes out in everything you do
Your mind spews rain of music so true

I am lost in the light of your unimpeachable words
Everything around me, in me, feels so damn absurd
I futilely try and fight a battle never won
And realize that I am already gone

Ooooh

I am mesmerized 
Oh, I can’t be surprised
That I am mesmerized
You can see it in my eyes

Am I blushing?
Am I rushing this through?
Are you laughing?
Oh damn, he knows it’s true

I am mesmerized 
Oh, I can’t be surprised
Oh so mesmerized
He can see it in my eyes

Knowing you’re far from mine
You’re words still stop all time
Because you’re so damn sublime
You’re simply out of this world
So just get out of my mind!

Oh! I’m mesmerized….

If there was a way inside your mind
There still wouldn’t be me to find
You’re moving so blasted fast
And I just can’t reach the mask

Man, it seems so useless, to try and make you see
That I want you beyond all reason, knowing it can never be
As you thrill the crowd, as you kiss the girl
I’ll just stare at your pictures, wishing I was her

Ooooh

I am mesmerized 
Oh, I can’t be surprised
That I am mesmerized
You can see it in my eyes

Am I blushing?
Am I rushing this through?
Are you laughing?
Oh damn, he knows it’s true

I am mesmerized 
Oh, I can’t be surprised
Oh so mesmerized
He can see it in my eyes

Knowing you’re far from mine
You’re words still stop all time
Because you’re so damn sublime
You’re simply out of this world
So just get out of my mind!

So lost, so gone, this war was never won

Mesmerized

* Dedicated to the singer Anthony Snape,
And...a secret person that no one shall know about! Muahahaha! (except Becca)

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire January 25, 2013 at 5:17 PM Dear Laura, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. You have again mesmerized my POETIC Soul with YOUR Words. Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments. I apologize for being away for so long. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

John Rhinem May 2, 2012 at 2:25 PM Smile ˜ Hahaha, I Thought This Was About David Copperfield? ˜ My Dear Beautiful Laura * I Love Your Pretty Song & I Too, Find Myself Sometimes Sliding A Bit Deeper Into This Enchanting Trance Called, 'The Sea of Love' * Somewhat Surprised & Quite Pleased That Your Lovely Priceless Beauty, Viewed & Perhaps Enjoyed A Few Of My Humble Words ˜ Maybe I. Should Post A Sequel Unto 'BloodRed Silk?' ˜ Smile, Just A Taste My Love!! ˜ Let Me Go View Another Of Your Treasures Verse * My Love to You, John!:) ˜

Melanie Hillmer March 21, 2012 at 12:38 PM What a unique piece! I really enjoyed this alot. Beautifully crafted. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank You for sharing.

Elizabeth Wesley March 18, 2012 at 3:17 PM We girls are too easily mesmerized; I'm one of those too Laura. Hope it turned out for you! Luv, Lizzie

Nick Bagnall February 16, 2012 at 5:50 AM I enjoyed that, it's very well structured and holds an interesting story. very well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2012 at 1:29 PM Beautiful dedicating Laura....tell me a secret...I will tell you one....:) :) - oxox love Anne-Lise

Poet Destroyer A February 14, 2012 at 7:57 PM laura.... Have a happy valentine days... ~ :-) Always, * PD

Dan Kearley February 14, 2012 at 1:22 AM That is a very nice song! I too was mesmerized! Wow! :o) Again,Wow! :o)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 14, 2012 at 1:11 AM Wow I was memerised xx

Rebecca Larkin February 13, 2012 at 11:21 PM Amazingsacutasticalednessofgulerificifiedsnapism hahaha I really enjoyed this very much and I KNOW THY SECRET PARSON yay! hahahaha ... anywayz very well done imensely (i think that's spelt wrong...) enjoyable