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Mesmerized

You’ll never know how much you speak to me I just can’t fathom the beauty that I see Your heart goes out in everything you do Your mind spews rain of music so true I am lost in the light of your unimpeachable words Everything around me, in me, feels so damn absurd I futilely try and fight a battle never won And realize that I am already gone Ooooh I am mesmerized Oh, I can’t be surprised That I am mesmerized You can see it in my eyes Am I blushing? Am I rushing this through? Are you laughing? Oh damn, he knows it’s true I am mesmerized Oh, I can’t be surprised Oh so mesmerized He can see it in my eyes Knowing you’re far from mine You’re words still stop all time Because you’re so damn sublime You’re simply out of this world So just get out of my mind! Oh! I’m mesmerized…. If there was a way inside your mind There still wouldn’t be me to find You’re moving so blasted fast And I just can’t reach the mask Man, it seems so useless, to try and make you see That I want you beyond all reason, knowing it can never be As you thrill the crowd, as you kiss the girl I’ll just stare at your pictures, wishing I was her Ooooh I am mesmerized Oh, I can’t be surprised That I am mesmerized You can see it in my eyes Am I blushing? Am I rushing this through? Are you laughing? Oh damn, he knows it’s true I am mesmerized Oh, I can’t be surprised Oh so mesmerized He can see it in my eyes Knowing you’re far from mine You’re words still stop all time Because you’re so damn sublime You’re simply out of this world So just get out of my mind! So lost, so gone, this war was never won Mesmerized
* Dedicated to the singer Anthony Snape, And...a secret person that no one shall know about! Muahahaha! (except Becca)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/25/2013 5:17:00 PM
Dear Laura, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. You have again mesmerized my POETIC Soul with YOUR Words. Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments. I apologize for being away for so long. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:25:00 PM
Smile ˜ Hahaha, I Thought This Was About David Copperfield? ˜ My Dear Beautiful Laura * I Love Your Pretty Song & I Too, Find Myself Sometimes Sliding A Bit Deeper Into This Enchanting Trance Called, 'The Sea of Love' * Somewhat Surprised & Quite Pleased That Your Lovely Priceless Beauty, Viewed & Perhaps Enjoyed A Few Of My Humble Words ˜ Maybe I. Should Post A Sequel Unto 'BloodRed Silk?' ˜ Smile, Just A Taste My Love!! ˜ Let Me Go View Another Of Your Treasures Verse * My Love to You, John!:) ˜
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Date: 3/21/2012 12:38:00 PM
What a unique piece! I really enjoyed this alot. Beautifully crafted. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank You for sharing.
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Date: 3/18/2012 3:17:00 PM
We girls are too easily mesmerized; I'm one of those too Laura. Hope it turned out for you! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 2/16/2012 5:50:00 AM
I enjoyed that, it's very well structured and holds an interesting story. very well done.
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Date: 2/15/2012 1:29:00 PM
Beautiful dedicating Laura....tell me a secret...I will tell you one....:) :) - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/14/2012 7:57:00 PM
laura.... Have a happy valentine days... ~ :-) Always, * PD
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Date: 2/14/2012 1:22:00 AM
That is a very nice song! I too was mesmerized! Wow! :o) Again,Wow! :o)
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Date: 2/14/2012 1:11:00 AM
Wow I was memerised xx
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Date: 2/13/2012 11:21:00 PM
Amazingsacutasticalednessofgulerificifiedsnapism hahaha I really enjoyed this very much and I KNOW THY SECRET PARSON yay! hahahaha ... anywayz very well done imensely (i think that's spelt wrong...) enjoyable
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