Mermaids

Myriads of murmuring marine maidens
Musically musing, making mariners mad;
Floating or frolicking freely and feeding
Feverish fishermen’s fleshly fantasies.
Sensually swimming silvery seductresses
Stripping slobbering sailors of their senses.
Inveigling and inspiring them to inundate the waters
In instant insanity in pursuit of Neptune’s daughters.
To some this may come as a shocker:
Mermaids lured them into Davy Jones’ locker.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Canerdy Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 7:16 PM
Wow! A lively, creative piece, David! Janice
Mcgee Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Wow...such wonderful wording with your alliterative rhyme to make a lovely image. Congrats on your top win.
Peterson Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 9:36 PM
Not many attempt such amazing alliterative rhyme, and I was slack jawed after my read...and very impressed. Well done!
Delaney Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 12:00 PM
I love mermaids poems and your clever alliteration adds a fun element. I ran a mermaid contest myself a few years ago here - I would have placed this one high. Mermaid kisses, SuZ
Squyres Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Creative and fun !!! With all that frolicking Davy's locker must be crowded.. I so enjoyed reading this …
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