Mermaid Tales

Out from the shallow waters 
far beyond the sandy shore, 
lives a wondrous creature 
curious eyes are searching for 

None can really say exactly 
just where she does dwell, 
maybe hiding down there deep 
at the bottom where treasure fell 

And with nothing but all honesty 
the old fishermen will swear, 
telling any good folks around 
that they have seen her there 

They speak of her flowing tail 
smoothly scaled in shimmering green, 
her hair a cascade of golden waves 
the prettiest they had ever seen 

No proof can ever be captured 
for mermaids are elusive and shy,
baited hooks reel in nothing 
but a glimpse caught in their eye 

Then gone again beneath the blue 
into the depths she does swiftly flee,
leaving the surface behind her now 
miles away in the mysterious sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chiri Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 1:16 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
Deschler Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 6:09 PM
Thank you Brenda :)
Inman Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 8:59 PM
The mystery prevails. Lovely write Kelly.
Deschler Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 11:25 PM
Thank you so very much James :)
Ashley Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 11:17 PM
I enjoyed your beautifully expressive poem, Kelly. It’s fantastic to think of mermaids really existing.. how awesome would they be! A lovely poem that captivated my imagination. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Deschler Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 11:09 PM
Thank you so very much Susan. I'm glad you enjoyed it ... I have been fascinated with mermaids since I was a kid, and yes it would be amazing to actually discover one :)
Horsman Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 6:27 AM
Hiya Kelly, just trawling through my old comments, and up came your name and so i read this wonderful poem, makes one want to search, for one of your lovely mermaids..truly lovely poetry....
Deschler Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 9:42 PM
Hello Harry, thank you so very much for your kind remarks on this poem... I've been away from Poetry Soup for awhile, but it is good to see you here once again :)
Gondolf Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 11:52 AM
I enjoyed your tale of the mystical mermaid, Kelly, nicely penned. All the best. John
Deschler Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 9:31 PM
Thank you so very much John... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 2:28 PM
I hope there is a contest you can enter this beauty in Kelly. This lovely poem left me with a dreamy vision of what it would be like to see a real mermaid. A beautifully written poem I am so happy I did not miss reading. This beautiful program is going into my Faves! : )
Deschler Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 9:28 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind remarks and for making this poem a favorite... I'm so glad you enjoyed it Connie :)
Callus Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 3:24 PM
Mermaids will forever be mysterious creatures; to some they herald danger...to others benevolence and love. Your mermaid is one that i would certainly not mind meeting, Kelly! ~ Warm regards // paul
Deschler Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 9:19 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind remarks Paul ... I have had a fascination with mermaids ever since I watched Disney's 'The Little Mermaid' when I was a kid. There is just something so intriguing about the mystery that surrounds them :)
Gauthier Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 9:36 PM
I am loving your fantasy theme, Kelly. Will be back to read more for sure...
Deschler Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 10:08 PM
Many thanks Line... I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem... You are most welcome to stop by anytime and have a read :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 5:28 PM
mythical, mystical, mysterious dear kelly.. you always manage to stun me... love it!...huggs
Deschler Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 9:05 PM
Thank you so much for you kind remarks Nette ... I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem :)
Michael Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 2:28 AM
Really entertaining write...Enjoyed it Kelly...Love your clarity...
Deschler Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 9:14 PM
Many thanks Arturo... I appreciate your kind remarks :)
Gauthier Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Absolutely divine, Kelly.
Deschler Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 10:07 PM
Thank you for your kind remarks Line :)
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