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Mermaid Tales

Out from the shallow waters far beyond the sandy shore, lives a wondrous creature curious eyes are searching for None can really say exactly just where she does dwell, maybe hiding down there deep at the bottom where treasure fell And with nothing but all honesty the old fishermen will swear, telling any good folks around that they have seen her there They speak of her flowing tail smoothly scaled in shimmering green, her hair a cascade of golden waves the prettiest they had ever seen No proof can ever be captured for mermaids are elusive and shy, baited hooks reel in nothing but a glimpse caught in their eye Then gone again beneath the blue into the depths she does swiftly flee, leaving the surface behind her now miles away in the mysterious sea.

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Date: 1/9/2020 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/24/2020 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Brenda :)
Date: 7/30/2019 8:59:00 PM
The mystery prevails. Lovely write Kelly.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/27/2019 11:25:00 PM
Thank you so very much James :)
Date: 7/27/2019 11:17:00 PM
I enjoyed your beautifully expressive poem, Kelly. It’s fantastic to think of mermaids really existing.. how awesome would they be! A lovely poem that captivated my imagination. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/27/2019 11:09:00 PM
Thank you so very much Susan. I'm glad you enjoyed it ... I have been fascinated with mermaids since I was a kid, and yes it would be amazing to actually discover one :)
Date: 7/24/2019 6:27:00 AM
Hiya Kelly, just trawling through my old comments, and up came your name and so i read this wonderful poem, makes one want to search, for one of your lovely mermaids..truly lovely poetry....
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/21/2019 9:42:00 PM
Hello Harry, thank you so very much for your kind remarks on this poem... I've been away from Poetry Soup for awhile, but it is good to see you here once again :)
Date: 7/20/2019 11:52:00 AM
I enjoyed your tale of the mystical mermaid, Kelly, nicely penned. All the best. John
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/21/2019 9:31:00 PM
Thank you so very much John... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Date: 7/16/2019 2:28:00 PM
I hope there is a contest you can enter this beauty in Kelly. This lovely poem left me with a dreamy vision of what it would be like to see a real mermaid. A beautifully written poem I am so happy I did not miss reading. This beautiful program is going into my Faves! : )
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/17/2019 9:28:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind remarks and for making this poem a favorite... I'm so glad you enjoyed it Connie :)
Date: 7/13/2019 3:24:00 PM
Mermaids will forever be mysterious creatures; to some they herald danger...to others benevolence and love. Your mermaid is one that i would certainly not mind meeting, Kelly! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/17/2019 9:19:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind remarks Paul ... I have had a fascination with mermaids ever since I watched Disney's 'The Little Mermaid' when I was a kid. There is just something so intriguing about the mystery that surrounds them :)
Date: 7/12/2019 9:36:00 PM
I am loving your fantasy theme, Kelly. Will be back to read more for sure...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/2/2019 10:08:00 PM
Many thanks Line... I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem... You are most welcome to stop by anytime and have a read :)
Date: 7/12/2019 5:28:00 PM
mythical, mystical, mysterious dear kelly.. you always manage to stun me... love it!...huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/17/2019 9:05:00 PM
Thank you so much for you kind remarks Nette ... I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem :)
Date: 7/10/2019 2:28:00 AM
Really entertaining write...Enjoyed it Kelly...Love your clarity...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/13/2019 9:14:00 PM
Many thanks Arturo... I appreciate your kind remarks :)
Date: 7/9/2019 4:06:00 PM
Absolutely divine, Kelly.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/2/2019 10:07:00 PM
Thank you for your kind remarks Line :)

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