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Mermaid Fantasy

The sea churned heavy in the wake of rolling,ripping thunder. As rain cascaded from the skies the vessel was pulled under. The winds were shrieking as the sailors ran to clutch the sails. Into the night could now be heard those far off deathly wails. Another man went over every time the dark sea burned. When suddenly there was a light just where the storm had turned. Within the light is where these beautiful creatures now emerged. Half woman and half fish they swam right where the waters surged. The men were frightened yet enthralled by their amazing beauty. As one by one they lost their heads forgotten was their duty. The creatures wrapped the men within their long and tangled hair. And slowly every sailor was drawn into their seaweed lair. As the storm raged on the creatures took the men below to their deep home within the tides and this much we do know. The shipmates never were seen again-they called them lost at sea. But the creatures say they took the men so they could set them free. for contest "Fantasy"

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Date: 6/18/2013 4:03:00 PM
Intriguing. Congratulations on your win. Connie
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Date: 6/17/2013 7:06:00 PM
Way to go Deb, congratulations.
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Date: 6/17/2013 6:34:00 PM
Mermaids are a great favorite of mine so I am faving this today. Congratulations on your win. SuZ
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Date: 6/17/2013 4:16:00 PM
Great writing, Deb... congrats on your win... Jake
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Date: 6/17/2013 11:59:00 AM
Deb,, ~CONGRATULATIONS~ thank you for taking your time and entering my contest. Luv* SKAT
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Date: 6/17/2013 9:05:00 AM
Facinating write. Loved it.
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Date: 6/17/2013 6:00:00 AM
Excelling stuff from you Deb...bravo.
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Date: 6/16/2013 7:24:00 PM
Deb I was captured by every word! Wonderful
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Date: 6/11/2013 11:13:00 PM
Wow Deb this is fantastic ...Seren
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Date: 6/11/2013 10:25:00 PM
This is a spellbinding fantasy write my friend! You have enthralled me by the splendor of this incredible poem this evening! I really loved this tremendous piece, what a spectacular poem, Great work!!
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