Mermaid Dreams

My sweet daughter
I picture you playing
amongst the mermaids,
wearing a necklace of sea-shells
and white shiny pearls.
You loved the ocean
and even on your worse days
when the cancer had
taken away all your energy
you would have us carry you 
down to the sandy beach.
You would sit watching the high tides
bouncing waves on the shore.
I often wondered what you thought
about as you sat there.
One day you turned to me and said,
"Wouldn’t it be great to be a mermaid?"
Memories of you as a small girl 
reading the Little Mermaid stories
brought fresh tears to my eyes.
"What would you do if you were a mermaid?"
I asked. 
So you told me how 
you would swim far away to
find your prince and forever love 
waiting on a distant shore.
Something that would never happen now
that your cancer was terminal.
Today with a heavy heart 
I spread your ashes across those same waves.
My heart breaking with missing you.
“Swim my little mermaid swim,”
I whisper into the breeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Villanueva Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 5:46 PM
WELCOME here in the poetry soup,...write more,..want read more from you... great piece... ***jun-jun
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June 2, 2011 at 3:12 PM
Dear Dee, your poem is heartbreaking , but you have penned a heavenly tribute to your daughter. Beautifully written . My deepest sympathy for you and your family. Anne.
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June 2, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Very touchy and moving piece, Dee
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June 2, 2011 at 1:13 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Dee. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Brown Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Dee. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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June 2, 2011 at 12:42 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry .. hope u enjoy PS site as u continue to share with luv..
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