Mermaid

at midnight
when the moon
glows bright
she rises
from the depths
bearing
aquamarine
jewels
from the sea



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

fantasymagicmoonnightseafree verse

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Jennifer Proxenos

June 8, 2019 at 11:58 AM

Great imagery in this write Line - almost seem real! Hugs, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier

June 8, 2019 at 12:35 PM

Thanks, Jennifer. Much appreciated.

Ann Gilmour

June 8, 2019 at 11:18 AM

I see her too Line, your exquisite imagery brings her to life - mesmerisingly beautiful! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier

June 8, 2019 at 12:35 PM

Thanks, Ann. Most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

June 8, 2019 at 10:08 AM

LOvely picture of her! I wish they were true, and maybe they are!

Line Gauthier

June 8, 2019 at 10:52 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit, Andrea. Who is saying they're not true?

Kaveesha Ruwindi

June 8, 2019 at 9:33 AM

Beautiful, Line. I saw her in my mind... coming out to breath in the light of the moon... :)

Line Gauthier

June 8, 2019 at 10:52 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Kaveesha.

Paul Callus

June 8, 2019 at 8:47 AM

I can picture this scene, Line. The splashing of water as she emerges definitely seems like jewels thrown into the air! ~ Regards // paul

Line Gauthier

June 8, 2019 at 10:53 AM

Thanks for your lovely comment, Paul.

Supraja Kannan

June 8, 2019 at 6:10 AM

How beautiful! Lovely imagery, Line...

Line Gauthier

June 8, 2019 at 8:27 AM

Thank you, Supraja. Much appreciated.

Jeanne Mcgee

June 7, 2019 at 9:59 PM

Yes, I've seen her too...beautiful image :aquamarine jewels from the sea"

Line Gauthier

June 7, 2019 at 10:40 PM

Thanks, Jeanne. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

June 7, 2019 at 9:18 PM

Ah, I can see her. Your imagery is that great.

Line Gauthier

June 7, 2019 at 9:54 PM

Thanks, Caren. It helps that you have a hyperactive imagination. LOL

Kurt Philip Behm

June 7, 2019 at 8:28 PM

Great imagery! "aquamarine jewels from the sea"

Line Gauthier

June 7, 2019 at 9:54 PM

Thanks, Kurt. Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

June 7, 2019 at 8:12 PM

So pretty a sight!

Line Gauthier

June 7, 2019 at 9:54 PM

Thank you, Kim.

W.A. Cholt

June 7, 2019 at 6:25 PM

Lovely image.

Line Gauthier

June 7, 2019 at 8:06 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, WA.

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