Mercy Dance

The mercy dance of the mind.
The merry dances of All 
but most is most
 when
mercy in its dance skips into a treat of arms and charms.
‘cause then they won’t mercy that mind at all.
dream girl they called it
hands that hold 
 growing old fluctuates
 between that mercy mind.
 Someday
I know its merry dance will bring a gumption of events. 
 So mercy dance, dance upon this floor
that writes and marries away its mind into some prose of ‘some’ reality and cause
So
 dream they must.
 But dream not alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 8, 2014 at 6:15 AM
Minakshi, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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February 24, 2014 at 2:53 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Minakshi - I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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February 26, 2014 at 2:17 PM
Thanks so very much for welcoming me..it feels good. And hope that we do get to read each others foften.. minakshi (mina)
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February 24, 2014 at 2:47 AM
Minakshi a big welcome, I like your words...David
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February 26, 2014 at 2:20 PM
David.. many thanks.- for the welcome and the comment! will soon be reading the others' but only on a sat .when i have the time off teaching! . minakshi (mina)
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February 23, 2014 at 10:02 PM
Minakshi, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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February 26, 2014 at 2:22 PM
sakta- many thanks.. I think 'Bunny" was at it peak with its visual and tight words. wonderful!. minakshi (mina)
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