Mercury Wave


When Water and Fire Collide
Tongues knoted in Silence, Silence Preside
Mercury Dulled Lovers Communication
Muddled Messages, Interactions Barely There
No Interest, No Warmth, No Feelings Shared
Creating Distractions to Minimized Relations
I am Here for Me, You're Here for You Situations
Eager to Strike a Match to Extinquish A Red Candle
Retrograde Realiazation, She's too Much to Handle
Afterall, 
She Walked Through the Fire Furnaced Air
With A Honey Pot Filled With Ale From the Fountain 
of The Dragon's Lair
She Saw Her Reflection In Mercury's Silvery Mirror
Emotionally Volatile, Diamond purifed of a Coal Cluster
So Now,
Under the Influence Of Miscommunication
Visible Lines were Blurred, Heated Moments
Dulled by Confusion, Desiring Isolation
In the End,
She Choose to Surf the Mercurial Anti Clockwise Wave
She Intelligently Flowed With the Current
Blatantly Refusing to Be Mercury's Warded Slave.

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Date: 3/5/2024 5:49:00 PM
Mercury which rules the mind, Bacchus the good time. Falls into retrograde, erosion of the ambrosian waves, when the element of gratitude is dulled by the smoke choking the air. Elementary how a fiery elemental heart who swims the deep can have communication extinguished instead of lavacly stoked in a blurred carnival atmosphere of the insincere, pool of quicksand, thank you mam, leaving only a candle light vigil for what could have been.
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Carlene Juju The Dragon
Date: 3/5/2024 6:40:00 PM
Lol, Nailed It!...Mercury was in retrograde fr fr!
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