Mercury Maiden

Silver painted girl Gleams like nature's element Mercury Maiden http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/art.php

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/17/2009 10:30:00 AM

Hi James and thankxxx for enjoying my Butterfly poem... years ago it won first prize in a contest out here on the East Coast... even got published in a small anthology... by the way, love your Mercury Maiden poem... I am a Gemini and my sign is governed by the quickness of Mercury ... so I guess t hat makes me a Mercury Maiden too... great words...

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 10/16/2009 3:17:00 PM

Dear James, Beautiful representation of the picture. I feel silver is cold , but in the inside she is e warm being. Just great. Thanks for your answer on my blog "Tears of Joy" Love, Iolanda

James Peranteau

Date: 10/12/2009 3:36:00 AM

James,..I could do a few things with this one,...yet,..I will refrain so this Senryu lives just as you wrote it,...your glitter,...and it glitters Sir !! james ps,...in mine favs !

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/10/2009 4:11:00 PM

Beautiful image, James. Can't help think of my friend Barbara who sprayed herself silver for an art project and was arrested while walking across campus wearing only her "Mercury Maiden" garb. LOL! She's going to love this. I can't wait to pass it on to her. Love to my favorite Highlander! Carolyn

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/10/2009 8:39:00 AM

Ahhh I have missed reading you James ... this ones spectacularly beautiful nice work :) love Jayne

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/10/2009 8:17:00 AM

Liquid silver girl lightning and gleaming ,beautiful words about this maiden Fraser.. so beautiful-Charma

Date: 10/9/2009 6:21:00 PM

There is more than one way your could look at this lending interest to your concise poem. Creative! Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

Abe Lopez

Date: 10/9/2009 6:07:00 PM

I like the concept ..... very nice James~!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2009 2:16:00 PM

Interesting girl here. I wonder. Keep writing. Sara