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Mercenary Heart

Battered and bruised and broken before My courageous heart, comes back for more It soldiers on but finds no peace Losing time and again, the battles never cease A kindred spirit it fights to find Shattered dreams and tears, in it's wake behind Mending itself after each conflict Future struggles, it can not predict One more battle, one more hill My enduring heart, perseveres until... This chosen battlefield, a final stand A fight for happiness, none left to command With a steady beat, it marches on My fearless heart, with it's armor gone The battle plan remains the same Take no prisoners, ignore the pain Your offer submitted, surrender deterred Relinquish my heart, death is preferred Battered and bruised and broken before My mercenary heart comes back for more... Feb 2 2016 an original poem by Daniel Turner

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Kathleen Kroll

Date: 3/6/2016 11:21:00 AM

Daniel, I am a newbie to this group but I readily see why your writing is so respected and admired and cherished. Thank you for sharing your innermost thoughts with us. I hope you will continue to do so. Your light helps me see how I can make sense of the struggles and defeats and victories I have encountered in my life.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/6/2016 11:29:00 AM

I am touched by your heartfelt comments. To think my humble writings can help another is quite emotional. My life has been all over the chart because I have followed my heart, sometimes when I knew better. Just take comfort knowing there are others who have faced and endured whatever hardships that befall whether self inflicted or by someone else. Peace to you and thank you with all of my heart:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 8:04:00 PM

I wear my hair up, and every now and then put a beanie on. I'm relaxed

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 7:43:00 PM

you are welcome Daniel... LINDA the flower girl :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/6/2016 7:49:00 PM

Careful now, I was around during the Summer of Love, back when young ladies such as yourself wore daisies in their hair. LOL

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 4:16:00 PM

Daniel, Congrats on "Your Dark Side of Love WIN!!!" XOX ~LINDA~

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/6/2016 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Linda, for the pretty flowers:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/5/2016 1:51:00 PM

this made me chill.. congrats on your win, daniel... huggs

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/5/2016 1:58:00 PM

Your continuous support and encouragement is a never ending inspiration. Thank you so much. I am humbly honored.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/5/2016 7:46:00 AM

Greetings Daniel. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/5/2016 7:50:00 AM

Thank you, Teddy. for stopping to visit and for the flowers. I appreciate your support.

Lu Loo

Date: 2/4/2016 1:10:00 PM

Such a battlefield it is, well written Daniel and congrats on your placement *smiles* -luloo

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/4/2016 1:24:00 PM

Thank you, Luloo. Sounds like a Pat Benatar song. I digress, I appreciate the flowers.

Andrew Crisci

Date: 2/4/2016 11:16:00 AM

My big congratulations on your win, Daniel. I admire your courage despite your struggles. Your dauntless spirit is felt in each line. Even though we are defeated, we will make a comeback and try to win no matter what it takes. Beautifully written with a true warrior's heart. Thanks for sharing your inspiring poem. Best Wishes, Andrew.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/4/2016 11:34:00 AM

Thank you, Andrew, for your words of support and encouragement. Once again I am humbled to be honored amidst all of this amazing talent.

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/4/2016 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Daniel. This touched my heart. It takes what it takes, I believe, and you expressed this so well. Sad but true. Being able to look back and see is the blessing. Well done.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/4/2016 10:36:00 AM

Thank you, Susan. It was a very emotional write for me. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I send it right back though. Congratulations to you.

Lin Lane

Date: 2/4/2016 7:14:00 AM

ahh, Daniel, you made me smile. The choice of winning positions in any contest is left to the decision of one mind, but I always see you as a winner, no matter what number is beside your poem. Now, thank you but ~ off of your knees.

Lin Lane

Date: 2/4/2016 6:53:00 AM

An excellent poem, Daniel. Congratulations on your placement!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/4/2016 7:06:00 AM

Thank you, Lin. I appreciate your comments and support. I'm gonna beat you one of these days, but for now I bow to your superiority:)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/4/2016 6:49:00 AM

very dark and sadly some people will relate to your words from personal experience:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/4/2016 7:05:00 AM

It is I who should be Congratulating you.:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/4/2016 7:03:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. Written during a dark time. Unfortunately, life is not always sunny and bright.

Lu Loo

Date: 2/3/2016 7:55:00 PM

Daniel, this is an outstanding entry for the contest! Good luck! *smiles*-luloo

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/3/2016 7:57:00 PM

Thank you, Luloo. I'm not sure it's what they're looking for but I thought I would give it a shot. Thanks for the flowers.

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/3/2016 1:01:00 PM

A sad read with a slap of reality requiring the reader to think as well as feel his way through the words. A lot of deep soul searching going on here. You have given a piece of yourself and laid it bare for all to see. Emile.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/3/2016 1:28:00 PM

Life is not always pleasant my friend. Thank you for immersing yourself in the words. I think you understand where this is coming from, as I have read your thoughts too. Please visit anytime, you are always welcome.

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/3/2016 1:00:00 AM

Great one my friend. A7

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/3/2016 7:21:00 AM

Thank you, Robert. The pleasure is always mine when you visit. Your kind comments always bring a smile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/2/2016 11:58:00 PM

This poem is outstanding Daniel! I predict to see it in the winner's circle my friend! #7

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/3/2016 12:21:00 AM

Thank you, Connie. You are sweet. I appreciate your kind words and continued support.

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 2/2/2016 7:53:00 PM

Beautifully written, as always. Good luck in the contest.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/2/2016 8:08:00 PM

Thank you dear Jeannie. My day is now complete:)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/2/2016 5:48:00 PM

'...the battle plan remains the same, rake no prisoners, ignore the pain,' strong wording and imagery. '...one more battle, one more hill, my enduring heart perseveres still,' excellent! BRAVO Daniel. Best wishes, Keith

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/2/2016 5:59:00 PM

Many thanks, Keith, Your time and comments are a valued treasure.