Daniel Turner Poet Rhyme

Mercenary Heart

Battered and bruised and broken before
My courageous heart, comes back for more
It soldiers on but finds no peace
Losing time and again, the battles never cease
A kindred spirit it fights to find
Shattered dreams and tears, in it's wake behind
Mending itself after each conflict
Future struggles, it can not predict
One more battle, one more hill
My enduring heart, perseveres until...

This chosen battlefield, a final stand
A fight for happiness, none left to command
With a steady beat, it marches on
My fearless heart, with it's armor gone
The battle plan remains the same
Take no prisoners, ignore the pain
Your offer submitted, surrender deterred
Relinquish my heart, death is preferred
Battered and bruised and broken before
My mercenary heart comes back for more...


        Feb 2 2016  an original poem by Daniel Turner

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Kathleen Kroll March 6, 2016 at 11:21 AM Daniel, I am a newbie to this group but I readily see why your writing is so respected and admired and cherished. Thank you for sharing your innermost thoughts with us. I hope you will continue to do so. Your light helps me see how I can make sense of the struggles and defeats and victories I have encountered in my life. Daniel Turner March 6, 2016 at 11:29 AM I am touched by your heartfelt comments. To think my humble writings can help another is quite emotional. My life has been all over the chart because I have followed my heart, sometimes when I knew better. Just take comfort knowing there are others who have faced and endured whatever hardships that befall whether self inflicted or by someone else. Peace to you and thank you with all of my heart:)

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2016 at 8:04 PM I wear my hair up, and every now and then put a beanie on. I'm relaxed

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2016 at 7:43 PM you are welcome Daniel... LINDA the flower girl :) Daniel Turner February 6, 2016 at 7:49 PM Careful now, I was around during the Summer of Love, back when young ladies such as yourself wore daisies in their hair. LOL

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2016 at 4:16 PM Daniel, Congrats on "Your Dark Side of Love WIN!!!" XOX ~LINDA~ Daniel Turner February 6, 2016 at 4:26 PM Thank you, Linda, for the pretty flowers:)

Nette Onclaud February 5, 2016 at 1:51 PM this made me chill.. congrats on your win, daniel... huggs Daniel Turner February 5, 2016 at 1:58 PM Your continuous support and encouragement is a never ending inspiration. Thank you so much. I am humbly honored.

Teddy Kimathi February 5, 2016 at 7:46 AM Greetings Daniel. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-) Daniel Turner February 5, 2016 at 7:50 AM Thank you, Teddy. for stopping to visit and for the flowers. I appreciate your support.

Beautiful Scars February 4, 2016 at 1:10 PM Such a battlefield it is, well written Daniel and congrats on your placement *smiles* -luloo Daniel Turner February 4, 2016 at 1:24 PM Thank you, Luloo. Sounds like a Pat Benatar song. I digress, I appreciate the flowers.

Andrew Crisci February 4, 2016 at 11:16 AM My big congratulations on your win, Daniel. I admire your courage despite your struggles. Your dauntless spirit is felt in each line. Even though we are defeated, we will make a comeback and try to win no matter what it takes. Beautifully written with a true warrior's heart. Thanks for sharing your inspiring poem. Best Wishes, Andrew. Daniel Turner February 4, 2016 at 11:34 AM Thank you, Andrew, for your words of support and encouragement. Once again I am humbled to be honored amidst all of this amazing talent.

Susan Gentry February 4, 2016 at 10:20 AM Congratulations on your win Daniel. This touched my heart. It takes what it takes, I believe, and you expressed this so well. Sad but true. Being able to look back and see is the blessing. Well done. Daniel Turner February 4, 2016 at 10:36 AM Thank you, Susan. It was a very emotional write for me. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I send it right back though. Congratulations to you.

Lin Lane February 4, 2016 at 7:14 AM ahh, Daniel, you made me smile. The choice of winning positions in any contest is left to the decision of one mind, but I always see you as a winner, no matter what number is beside your poem. Now, thank you but ~ off of your knees.

Lin Lane February 4, 2016 at 6:53 AM An excellent poem, Daniel. Congratulations on your placement! Daniel Turner February 4, 2016 at 7:06 AM Thank you, Lin. I appreciate your comments and support. I'm gonna beat you one of these days, but for now I bow to your superiority:)

Jan Allison February 4, 2016 at 6:49 AM very dark and sadly some people will relate to your words from personal experience:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Daniel Turner February 4, 2016 at 7:05 AM It is I who should be Congratulating you.:) Daniel Turner February 4, 2016 at 7:03 AM Thank you, Jan. Written during a dark time. Unfortunately, life is not always sunny and bright.

Beautiful Scars February 3, 2016 at 7:55 PM Daniel, this is an outstanding entry for the contest! Good luck! *smiles*-luloo Daniel Turner February 3, 2016 at 7:57 PM Thank you, Luloo. I'm not sure it's what they're looking for but I thought I would give it a shot. Thanks for the flowers.

Emile Pinet February 3, 2016 at 1:01 PM A sad read with a slap of reality requiring the reader to think as well as feel his way through the words. A lot of deep soul searching going on here. You have given a piece of yourself and laid it bare for all to see. Emile. Daniel Turner February 3, 2016 at 1:28 PM Life is not always pleasant my friend. Thank you for immersing yourself in the words. I think you understand where this is coming from, as I have read your thoughts too. Please visit anytime, you are always welcome.

Robert Lindley February 3, 2016 at 1:00 AM Great one my friend. A7 Daniel Turner February 3, 2016 at 7:21 AM Thank you, Robert. The pleasure is always mine when you visit. Your kind comments always bring a smile.

Connie Marcum Wong February 2, 2016 at 11:58 PM This poem is outstanding Daniel! I predict to see it in the winner's circle my friend! #7 Daniel Turner February 3, 2016 at 12:21 AM Thank you, Connie. You are sweet. I appreciate your kind words and continued support.

Jeannie Cronin February 2, 2016 at 7:53 PM Beautifully written, as always. Good luck in the contest. Daniel Turner February 2, 2016 at 8:08 PM Thank you dear Jeannie. My day is now complete:)

Keith Bickerstaffe February 2, 2016 at 5:48 PM '...the battle plan remains the same, rake no prisoners, ignore the pain,' strong wording and imagery. '...one more battle, one more hill, my enduring heart perseveres still,' excellent! BRAVO Daniel. Best wishes, Keith Daniel Turner February 2, 2016 at 5:59 PM Many thanks, Keith, Your time and comments are a valued treasure.