Mentor...

Dance ind;pendant and flash the lashes Enticing Pen with the dots and dashes Mending men that fear the clashes Inviting light says steer the Masses… Giving guise in disguise of classes Obsolete scribes romance the lasses Delivering rhymes in code & riddles Dance with me taking whole my middle Enter a mind and touch my center Surrender, to a Love enCounter Sensuality, is the sign of my Mentor

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Billy Thekidster

Date: 12/7/2009 2:30:00 PM

I found this and many other works of yours to be an amazing read, but right now I'm exhausted, so this will be the only comment I'll leave. Great Stuff Izzy. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/6/2009 8:08:00 PM

Magical flow of words and the mysterious illusion to it... bravo, Izzy, good write... love your last line... I just wrote Sexy Beautiful today... simple words but they say much ...if u get time read it.. thankxxx and have a great weekend... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 11/6/2009 5:41:00 PM

This is a lovely poem Izzy. Pam

P Sheart

Date: 11/6/2009 4:33:00 PM

Beautiful Izzy! Love the mystique in this too. Truly enjoyed, Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty