Mentally Decompensated

E_ emotinal outburst
M_ mentally decompensated
E_  emtionally driven
R_  room 21
G_  gurney
E_  enter the white coat
N_  nurse with pills
C_  Cody already passed out asleep
Y_  youthful love gone bad

R_  restraint bed
O_  open door _guards
O_  opportunity for change
M_  mental health gone bad~tragic

(Spent the day at the emergency
room with Cody..They sent him
to a crisis center...Here we go
again with mental health visits
and pills..)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Maverick Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 2:34 PM
You must be a tough cookie Sarah, hang on in there, i will be asking for you and Cody..
Poet Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 7:17 PM
Sorry to know this Sara.Hope Cody is better now.Very effectively you have expressed the agony of your mind here.
Long Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 4:23 PM
aww sorry sara chin up things will be ok love cory this was a great piece!!!
Devonshire Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 2:11 PM
Hon, I'm so sorry you're going through all of this now. I hope Cody gets the help he needs to handle his recent loss. My stepbrother's son committed suicide on Christmas Eve when his girlfriend broke up with him. At least you were able to get Cody to the hospital in time to save his life. Blessings and peace, Carolyn
Susan Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 8:19 AM
Sounds awful! I'm so sorry to hear of this and know it's true. I wish you much fortitude and hope for better days.
Onclaud Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 2:19 AM
i feel with you in this one, sara... such deep poetry; keep your chin up as prayers continue.:) huggs, nette
Cooper Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 5:15 PM
sorry to hear that about cody
Foulk Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 9:56 AM
yes Sara sorry to hear about Cory, I will pray for cory, hope everything turns out ok. it does help to write about it to let others know like you have done so we all can pray for you and cory.
Mannan Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 10:02 PM
Sad Sara. My prayers for Cory. May he get well soon.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 8:56 PM
oh so sorry to hear about this Sara my friend.. will put Cody on our prayer line again..luv.. a wonderful Acrostic with descriptive issues on this subject luv..
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 6:50 PM
sara, I can so relate to this. It's happened to me with my hubbie and his severe anxiety, though never to the point of him having to go to the hospital,but I've been many times to ER for his asthma problems and him not able to breathe, and I have others close to me with problems of emotional outburst. It is indeed tragic when also coupled with other diseases. Some people just have it much worse than others and life seems so unfair to me sometimes. U R like me, writing your pain out thru poetry.
Mehta Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 6:24 PM
I am grieved to hear the news , sara
Johnson Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 6:22 PM
oh deer how sad but never bad , the white coats are awaiting, dodge n sidestep lad, great verse no debating:) xo, Don
Hendricks Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 6:02 PM
Ouch!! The very best to both you and Cody, Sara. You're in my thoughts. <3<3<3
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