Ilene Bauer Poet Rhyme

Mentalist

Saw a mentalist today;
His name is Derren Brown.
You can’t explain the things he does – 
Your world goes upside down.

He nicely asked the audience
It they would not reveal
Illusions witnessed on the stage
Despite their strong appeal.

So all that I’m allowed to say
Is I enjoyed his show
And if you have a chance to see it,
I’d suggest you go.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Caren Krutsinger October 31, 2019 at 10:03 AM Man, I do want to go. I will look him up now. Do you get a finder's fee?

Maurice Rigoler October 30, 2019 at 8:03 AM Sorry, dear, I stay clear of mentalists. No humans have that kind of power, and if they do the source, as far as I'm concerned, is not a benign Creator but another and benign at all! / M

Rico Leffanta October 27, 2019 at 4:47 PM Yes, the Village Voice could certainly use your skill! Aloha! Rico

Eileen Manassian October 27, 2019 at 5:44 AM How interesting, dear. Now you have us all intrigued! :) I've been away for some time...it's good to read you again. Ilene Bauer October 27, 2019 at 4:28 PM so nice to see your face and name, eileen! welcome back!

Gershon Wolf October 26, 2019 at 8:41 PM I'm intrigued (too), and am glad that you didn't reveal Derren's illusions. AND I certainly admire you for you code of ethics. Warm wishes, Ilene! :) Ilene Bauer October 27, 2019 at 4:29 PM thank you so much, gershon!

Ts Poetry October 26, 2019 at 7:43 PM I'm intrigued Ilene Bauer October 27, 2019 at 4:29 PM check him out, ts! very entertaining! thanks for the comment...